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Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 25

 Great! Time for payback! Ryan will feel the pain he inflicted on others!



Author's Response:

I'm actually excited on typing the next chapter. I have to sit and brainstorm the ideas now lol.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 24

Such a cliffhanger!... Can't wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I must say I find it very clever how you manage to tie in different elements that most people forget about. Kind of like the show Avatar. Awesome job developing Alex's character.

 

I can't wait to see the big climactic battle.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 24

OK, looking forward to Chapt. 25.

Interesting word count on this story: 111,111.

Reviewer: writer27 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 24

Not gonna lie I have been following this story intently since last week anxiously awaiting updates. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!! lol Part of me hopes that Jaden grows however, this story has opened my eyes to other aspects of the giantess fetish such as tiny man.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was a little confused at the end, who was Alex pointing her gun at? 

I thoroughly enjoyed this and yes, Alex does have a real dilemma. Make Jaden a mega who could help stomp Ryan despite Jaden saying he was fine with his size as it or shrink Ryan and crush him right there but pass on making Jaden their equal in size? 

 Ryan tried his best to make Jaden hate Alex but haha it failed so badly. I can't wait to see who she fires the gun at and also what the gothic giantess is waiting for. 



Author's Response:

She's pointing it at Ryan. 

 

The gothic giantess....oh you'll see you'll all see...I did give a spoiler alert about her; just make sure you remember her and remember her well.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 23

Definitely enjoyed this, it was a relief to find out Crystal survived another chapter. Now its time to deal with Ryan, that giant turd.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 23

Awesome chapter!... If there is indeed a sequel, it'll be hard to top this story!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 23

Awesome chapter!... If there is indeed a sequel, it'll be hard to top this story!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'm so glad Crystal survived that! And Toya, good riddance,  she didn't show any redeeming qualities at all, and if she DID have them well too bad! Not everyone should get a pardon, especially from something as fucked up as killing an entire family in cold blood!

Reviewer: edgehead123 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 22

This story is amazing! I can't wait for more. I'm off to check out your other stories, thanks so much.

Author's Response:

Sorry this is the first of many stories lol!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

Well, this has to end soon... I just know it does. Great chapter as always! :)

As for hint to season 2, I guess this means there's a sequel in the works!... Awesome to hear!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 22

Damn it, Crystal looks very dead now! They need a miracle since Ava is close to death as well, Tasha can't do anything and Alex is hopelessly outnumbered.



Author's Response:

Crystal isn't dead...Yet anyway...As I went back and reread the chapter I noticed that the wrong message may have been given on that part.  Which was my mistake and will be cleared up immediately....Actually it already is...Crystal is still alive for at least one more second. 

 

So again sorry for the misunderstanding but no Crystal isn't dead

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 21

Wow, shit has hit the fan! A bunch of GTS, soldiers and Ryan all vs 3 GTS's! How the hell are they supposed to win this one?



Author's Response:

How indeed my friend. Truth be told...I don't even know lol.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 21

This chapter was great. When I first started reading this story, I had absolutely no idea the plot would get so deep and complicated!

I can't wait to see how this a ends!

Author's Response:

I know right, That's the joy of free writing! Only brainstormed the beginning and off I went from there lol!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Damn damn this is one hell of a cliffhanger! Don't keep us waiting for too long.



Author's Response:

Lol I'm working I'm working!

Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bravo my friend, that was a pretty good backstory for Ava, now I know what she meant when she said she's killed before.

I can't wait to see what you go onto when this story is finished.



Author's Response:

I'm actually still brainstomring on that while I try to finish this one up, so now the readers have heard Ava's and Tasha's back story and why they are the way they are, now what about Alex? Oh the tangle web i weave lol.

Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 20

Whelp that certainly answers my question. Though now I'm curious to hear the girls stories as well (unless it was already explained and I missed it somehow). When did they first kill and why?

These characters of yours are so interesting I find myself wanting to know more and more.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

That ok, I'n glad your back. Life is funny that way. It gets in the way of things.

Here:

a hand full of regulars’

You mean: handful

And also, an apostrophie like that represents multiple ownership.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 20

Can't wait for the last few chapters!

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