[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
Sorry that I haven't reviewed this story In a while but I will admit it's amazing to finally see Ryan get everything he deserved in the sexiest way possible :) amazing story well done
Date: August 24 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
Nice story and glad Alex got her revenge over Ryan. Hopefully the final chapter will contain some gentle fun with Alex and Jaden. All in all Alex barly showed much gentle behavor in the whole story. Mostly only after she realised her mistake as she tortured jaden thinking it was ryan.
And after she had her revenge on ryan so cruel it would be a nice contrast to see her acting gentle to Jaden in the end. :)
[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 27
A little hypocritical of Alex to mutilate Ryan and leave him for dead just minutes after advocating for Tasha not to kill Erwin...But it's not as if Ryan didn't deserve everything he just got and more!
Anyway this story was great! I really loved the wild ride! I'm looking forward to how you wrap this story up next chapter, and what your future gts writting plans are!
Date: August 24 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
This was a great way to end off the story... And Ryan :)... If there's one more chapter, that's awesome.
In addition, I totally can see this working as a sequal. With the great set of characters you got here, I'm sure you could work something out!
By far one of the greatest first attempts at a story I've ever seen on this site!
[Report This]Date: August 24 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
I enjoyed it very much and if there is a sequel to this then I can't wait to read it.
Date: August 21 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love that last chapter. Can't waIt to see what Alex has in store for little Ryan. Hes had it coming for a while.
Date: August 21 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
Awesome. Really nice cliff hanger.
Date: August 21 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow!! that was amazing!! I can't wait to see what happen in next chapter...I've been waiting for Alex vs. 'little' Ryan for sooooo long haha
Thanks for your effort with the story, I'm having a great time reading it :)
[Report This]Date: August 20 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant! Ryan deserved everything he got!
Then you threw us that scene with Tasha struggling to decide over whether to kill Erwin or not. Now we'll see whether Ryan gets to live or not.
[Report This]Date: August 20 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
Such acliffhanger! Can't wait to see if Ryan is finally finished off.
Date: August 20 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
Awesome! I can't wait for Alex's alone time with Ryan! I think whatever he ends up getting is probably too good for him.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Finally, I was waiting for him to shrink! There better not be a plot twist that messes things up though!
Date: August 02 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
well done dude/ma'am great story.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of two stories I have become a total slave to reading. Please continue.
Date: August 01 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
DEFINITELY ONE OF MY FAVORITE ONGOING SERIES ON THIS WEBSITE
Keep up the good work.
:D
Date: August 01 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
If Jaden doesn't have a good ol' fisticuffs brawl with Ryan, I'm going to be disappointed.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
Nicely done, I just hope that you don't have them go easy on Ryan. I wonder how Tasha dispatched two others GTS but had trouble with one earlier....
There was a quote from Assassin's Creed 4 in there....
Date: August 01 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hanging on the edge of my seat. MORE PLEASE!
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wonder how long Ryan's final moments will be dragged out?
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
To say I'm excited for the next chapter would be an understatement!
Author's Response:
Lol I'm so glad to hear it. I'll try my best not to disappoint and try to be extra cruel with a side of sadistic...I'm pretty sure Ryan deserves everything he gets anyway.