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Reviewer: ShroomXIII Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 25

Finally, I was waiting for him to shrink! There better not be a plot twist that messes things up though!

Reviewer: Flame Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2014 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 25

well done dude/ma'am great story.

Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

Nicely done, I just hope that you don't have them go easy on Ryan. I wonder how Tasha dispatched two others GTS but had trouble with one earlier....

There was a quote from Assassin's Creed 4 in there....

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 25

To say I'm excited for the next chapter would be an understatement!



Author's Response:

Lol I'm so glad to hear it. I'll try my best not to disappoint and try to be extra cruel with a side of sadistic...I'm pretty sure Ryan deserves everything he gets anyway.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 25

 Great! Time for payback! Ryan will feel the pain he inflicted on others!



Author's Response:

I'm actually excited on typing the next chapter. I have to sit and brainstorm the ideas now lol.

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