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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 21

Wow, shit has hit the fan! A bunch of GTS, soldiers and Ryan all vs 3 GTS's! How the hell are they supposed to win this one?



Author's Response:

How indeed my friend. Truth be told...I don't even know lol.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 21

This chapter was great. When I first started reading this story, I had absolutely no idea the plot would get so deep and complicated!

I can't wait to see how this a ends!

Author's Response:

I know right, That's the joy of free writing! Only brainstormed the beginning and off I went from there lol!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Damn damn this is one hell of a cliffhanger! Don't keep us waiting for too long.



Author's Response:

Lol I'm working I'm working!

Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bravo my friend, that was a pretty good backstory for Ava, now I know what she meant when she said she's killed before.

I can't wait to see what you go onto when this story is finished.



Author's Response:

I'm actually still brainstomring on that while I try to finish this one up, so now the readers have heard Ava's and Tasha's back story and why they are the way they are, now what about Alex? Oh the tangle web i weave lol.

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