[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
The Showa era (1954-1975) was the best.
MRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAW!
Date: May 30 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well that sucks. I'm everything will turn out ok in the end though. In relation to the chapter end notes, I should probably watch Godzilla even if I know science says Godzilla is physically impossible.
Author's Response:
Don't you dare....Insult Godzilla like that....Ever....Again.......
"Godzilla Roar"
[Report This]Date: May 26 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Major plot twist... Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 26 2014 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Damn man, so this is what their mercy got them. Now there's only Tasha and she is not enough to stop them from taking Jaden. I hope they'll be okay but it seems like they're really out.
Come on Alex and Ava, you can do it!
[Report This]Date: May 26 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Pretty harsh chapter. I'd never peg Ava and Alex to be mass murderers!! I know giantesses eat and crush people in nearly every story but I thought those two were supposed to be better than that! I don't know; this feels a little out-of-character, even though it's a little justified.
Author's Response:
Still there's somethings you don't know. There's a reason behind the direction I chose...things will come to the light.
Date: May 26 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
You know, if they had not been taking they're sweet time in mayham, that probably would have turnd out better.
Lord Ryan? Is the President of the country in this story so naive that he is allowing practical insurrection from Ryan? This cou- wait, memorial day, cannot critique U.S.
Like the chapter, I just wish they were longer, so more deatail and more steps in the story could go on without the wait.
Author's Response:
I want to do a long chapter, but I run out of ideas being that this is my first time writing something like this. Maybe if I just do a segment at a time and add them all in they'd be longer....something I'll definitely try next time. Also, you have to remember their not cold blood killers, which is why they gave so many chances for people to escape. Like in real life they have a conscious, yes they killed a few but they didn't want a full on slaughter fest. But the story still has some ways to go, so I'll try to do better in detail and chapter length next chapter...maybe that'll speed things up