You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh no! Jaden is hurt! This is bad...

Reviewer: ShroomXIII Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

I would pay to see you make a manga out of this!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter... Can't wait to see Alex & Ava get their revenge :)

Author's Response:

Will they get revenge? Or will it be spoiled by my rotten personalty? All will come to the light soon. 

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

I liked the chapter. Easy to read, lack of Ryan and a nice set-up for things to come. Although, there's no Commander so no bonus points.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 16

You could, it seems good enough. Just finish this before you start on the manga. 

Tasha is making a run for it with Crystal while Alex and Ava decide to fight back. How exciting! Now if only there were a way to defeat Ryan but that bastard seems to be too big to take down at the moment.



Author's Response:

All may not be what it seems....

You must login (register) to review.