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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
Date: May 30 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no! Jaden is hurt! This is bad...
Reviewer: ShroomXIII Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Date: May 21 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
I would pay to see you make a manga out of this!
Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Date: May 21 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter... Can't wait to see Alex & Ava get their revenge :)
Author's Response:
Will they get revenge? Or will it be spoiled by my rotten personalty? All will come to the light soon.
Reviewer: chrlorez Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Date: May 21 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
I liked the chapter. Easy to read, lack of Ryan and a nice set-up for things to come. Although, there's no Commander so no bonus points.
Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
Author's Response:
Date: May 21 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
You could, it seems good enough. Just finish this before you start on the manga.
Tasha is making a run for it with Crystal while Alex and Ava decide to fight back. How exciting! Now if only there were a way to defeat Ryan but that bastard seems to be too big to take down at the moment.
Author's Response:
All may not be what it seems....