Date: May 03 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
That was pretty good; and the ending has me worried.
[Report This]Date: May 03 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
Goddamn it! I'm sick of love triangles. There's only one solution; introduce a second love interest for Ava, and pair them away. Otherwise, you'll drag out your plot unnecessarily.
And seriously, ax Ryan off already. Every second he lives, he makes me hate him more. He's a living human rights violation.
Author's Response:
Ummmm....The love interest as nothing to do with the plot.plus I never said who loves who. If anything the three are just playing around and trying new things....calm down and just read it'll be fine. The plot will still carry on like it is now.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder how this will happen, how will Alex kill Jaden? Probably by accident but this is cruel. I wonder what the penalty is for killing a regular?
Date: May 02 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
NBA, really? You know what, I love video games. No full fledged review when an game series that has been milked by EA since the start of the Madden series, and those clowns resized they could make a quick buck by releasing a hand assed game annually is on the story.
Ubisoft does the same, but they work harder on quality.
Love the chapter. Play Far Cry, ALL ASSASSIN'S CREED's, and Splinter Cell.
There is a massive amount of realism in this story. Ads to the affect of being in the text.
Author's Response:
Lol I know but when I have yet to see a girl play sports games. Which is why I chose it. If a girl can beat you at sports, then she can beat you in just about anything in my opinion.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
This was an awesome chapter... Been waiting to see this side of Alex.
Interesting cliffhanger at the end with Ryan.
Still linda wondering when we'll meet more regular sized people besides Crystal and Jaden. My guess is that it's when spring break's over