Reviewer: chrlorez Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Happiness? Mending relationships? Taking things slowly? I'm not used to humanity in my giantess stories.

Again, I really like this story, but now I have no idea where it's heading. All I have are two hopes for the story.

1. Ryan must be killed, sent to the Phantom Zone, depowered and/or killed. Violently and torturously.

2. Please. Please please please. Please no love triangles!

That's all I got. Enjoy your five star rating.

P.S.: You know in your heart it to be true. Ryan MUST die. That's his fate.

Author's Response:

Can't promise you anything simply because.... I like both girls.

Reviewer: highheight Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

 This chapter was highly descriptive, and the imagery was amazing, however I think it would have been better for you to have done one of two things, make it so that Ava would be the only one able to remend the friendship, or made it so that, in order to break the tension, Jaden would ask her to place him in one of her parts for awhile, jokingly of course. He would have to be smiling as he said it. Other than that this chapter was OK, not the best, but after all the tension we just went through how could it be an amazing chapter?

Author's Response:

I thought about brining Ava into it or dragging it out a bit longer, but I felt like I had put both of them through enough for now. Plus I wanted to start building on all three of them as the story moves along. So the readers can become more in tune with the characters.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

Here's to better times! Jaden and Alex should get alonf fine.

Author's Response:

Cheers my friend cheers.