[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
So much for putting the "fun" in "dysfunctional."
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
You keep surprising me by making your writing better with each chapter. Again, love how your style is less of a "mass-murder" immediately kill everything in sight kind of style. I'm more of a mouth/tongue play man myself, so all of the licking and descriptions of how interactions between jaden and amys face close up are stellar. Also, in regards to my request for my challenge, what could I do to make it more clear? Again, love your style and think it would get out everything my imagination has in mind into story form. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Lol, I know what you mean. I'm not into the mass murder kill millions of people and think it's sexy. Not even really into mindless killing at all. Despite a woman being huge, I just refuse to believe that she just go completely psycho and murder someone. But I'm glad you and others enjoyed the chapter. I'm also in light vore and mouth play. Mixed in with butt and feet. So I'm just adding as I go.
Author's Response:
Lol, I know what you mean. I'm not into the mass murder kill millions of people and think it's sexy. Not even really into mindless killing at all. Despite a woman being huge, I just refuse to believe that she just go completely psycho and murder someone. But I'm glad you and others enjoyed the chapter. I'm also in light vore and mouth play. Mixed in with butt and feet. So I'm just adding as I go.
Author's Response:
Lol, I know what you mean. I'm not into the mass murder kill millions of people and think it's sexy. Not even really into mindless killing at all. Despite a woman being huge, I just refuse to believe that she just go completely psycho and murder someone. But I'm glad you and others enjoyed the chapter. I'm also in light vore and mouth play. Mixed in with butt and feet. So I'm just adding as I go.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wholly shit, that was one stretch of hell, you sent shivers down my back! The imagry was amazing in this one, thanks for the butt part by the way, I can't wait for the next chapter, each one was supberb, but this one takes the cake!
I feel so bad for Jaden, nearly cried for him, I wonder how Alex and Ava are going to fix him after this.
Author's Response:
Your absolutely welcome. I was planning on putting it in there at some point but wanted it to be special. I'm trying to answer all fetish needs as well as mine lol.
Date: April 30 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
A giantess story with depth, you don't see that everyday. Looks like Alex realized she's becoming the very thing she hates so much. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Date: April 30 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
I wondering if Ava was going to come back. She took rather a long time and at first I thought you'd forgotten about her enitrely. I suppose you wanted to add in all of that gruesome stuff.
Author's Response:
It's the way I have it set up. I had another plan on Ava actually making it back but decided to go this route instead.
Date: April 29 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Pretty dark, but an awesome addition nontheless... After seeing what Haden went through, I'm not sure I want to see what'll happen to Ryan if he winds up shrunk
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow. Just wow.
I forgot that Jaden had a shitty life too. This was a surprisingly powerful chapter, despite how played this has been. Props. I like character development. This story is getting fun.
Just... um... please don't put a love triangle between Ava, Alex and Jaden. Those are so tired.
P.S.: Can you add another normal-sized character soon?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, although I can't promise anything on the triangle part. Actually I wouldn't even call it a triangle. It may be a square by the time I'm done or maybe a single couple....who knows I sure dont. This has been a free fall from the beginning....or has it been?
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Defiantly one hell of a chapter well one of many so far, I think this is the first story iv felt the need to review almost every chapter lol one amazing story I love how she's only just stared to show some humility after almost biting him in half :p
Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Lol I thought you were the cruel type.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Two stories, two giantesses coming around. Now Alex must be the one to bridge a rapidly growing divide between the two.