[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well, at least we now know why Alex is behaving this to Jaden. Crap rolls downhill! But, while it explains, it still doesn't excuse.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story is amazing! For some reason this feels like a manga, if your kind of heading that direction then the likelihood of both Alex and Jaden falling in love will be high. I can't wait! Please never stop writing this! Just to show off how much I like this story, I made an account on this site just to respond to your story.
Author's Response:
I really appreiciate the compliment. Yea I have written fanfictions for awhile and that's where my background of writing comes from. As for Jaden and Alex, there's alot that's going to happen. That's all I can tell you.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Alex is a bitch, Ryan is a sociopath, Ava is friends with a bitch, and Jaden Smith is a terrible actor. And how did the government do all this with 14 trillion in debt!? This story sucks!!!!
This story better get... better!! As it is, it only gets four and 9/10 stars!!! Clean up your act!!
Author's Response:
Oh I promise it'll get better, I wouldn't want to disappoint anybody.
Date: April 27 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
I half suspect something along these lines. I knew there must be an underlying reason for the nastiness.
Author's Response:
Lol you are correct to suspect something.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
This does not completely mean Alex is out of my bad side.
I really like this story, keep it up!
Date: April 26 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is Ryan normal sized? You haven't revealed whether men can become giants because if he's normal sized I'm all for her stepping on him, He's at cartoonish levels of jackassery right now.
It's sad that I know exactly how a cool asshole sounds.
Author's Response:
Is he a giant? Is he normal sized? Why would I give the answers away so plainly lol. Let me just tell you and all readers this....expect some heavy plot twisters.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
It certainly is and now we know why. Is Ryan a giant or is he normal sized? I just hope he stays away from Jaden, Ryan might see him as competition and do worse things to him.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter... Seems like Jeden is safe with Alex's friend... As for Alex's ex waiting outside her places, well I don't have much hope for him, that's for sure
Author's Response:
Lol why the lack of faith? You may be surprised by what you read next chapter.