[Report This]Date: May 13 2014 10:14 AM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Now, this is my kind of plot-twist.
Brilliant! :-D
[Report This]Date: May 13 2014 8:39 AM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
"Amy made him so made he forgot all fear" made me doubt my English for a few seconds... but most importantly it made me realize I still hadn't congratulated you on this story.
Especially because this story is basically the opposite of what I like - giant woman instead of tiny guys, good giantess instead of evil, and so on -, and yet I can't get enough of it :)
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 11:56 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Great chapter!
Amy is redeemed.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 9:58 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Ahahaha I knew there was gonna be a connection with Ben family and the captain! That was good, that was really good
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 9:26 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Those people said nothing because they knew no one would believe it or they would just ostracise them. Really touching to see them and Ben stand up for Amy who might not take this as well as Ben thinks. We'll see.
Now Captain Thomilson, what will he provide to this tale? A new antagonist or somebody more heroic. Can't wait to see what happens, will Ben confess his love for Amy? Or will she break down when she finds out what happened?
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 9:26 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Great chapter once again.. Can't wait to see Amy's reaction, and if this story will spawn a equal.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 8:57 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Man I love this story. The more you learn about Amy, the more you like her. Wonder if Ben will get to break the news to her. He's won the town over for her, let's see if he can win her over also.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 8:48 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Oh! What a twist!! Both of them. The town's accounts on Amy's good deeds and the army twist. How did I not see the last one? Really, IT'S TOO DAMN OBVIOUS! HOW DID I MISS THOSE!?
Did I mention how much I love this story? Cause I really, really do. It's a fairly simple story admittedly, but it's extremely great execution. I really really love everything in this story.
Except your grammar. You repeated "made to" in one sentence next to each other. 4.9 out of 5 stars. Try your luck next time...
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 7:50 PM Title: Ever Taken a Bullet For Someone?
Well...that was beautifully done. Honestly, it felt like a scene out of a movie. The dialogue was perfect.
Hopefully Amy will be willing to stay. She seemed quite intent on leaving before, but a lot of people stood up for her. I'm sure she'll make the right choice.
Loved this chapter.