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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 8:54 PM Title: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.

This is moving up my favorites of the year list with each chapter.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 11:36 AM Title: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.

Actually, I said if you see five stars there you are a complete idiot. Since you clearly see the 4.9 stars, you are not a complete idiot  Unless you want to be a complete idiot, in which I will gladly give you five full stars. 

Check. Your move, White side. >:)

And you're welcome. Your story is really, really good, and honestly, my favorite running right now since "Consequences" . But I like to troll and complain about stuff I love, so 4.9 stars for you. :p

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 8:18 AM Title: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.

Hmmmmmm! Is this where Amy's dad becomes Terry O'Quinn to Ben, Mark, and Johnny's collective D.B. Sweeney? If so, I wonder if we're going to get to see Amy figure skate? ;-)

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 8:47 PM Title: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.

I know you're reading my reviews, since you tend to answer them all the time, so as you can expect, I liked this chapter. This literally filled almost every small problem I had with the story. The over-armament of the guards, the question about Amy's parents (or parent) and all this other stuff. I'm getting more and more excited reading this story. I actually care about these characters, and there really isn't anything I can call really unnecessary or stupid. I love this story.

P.S. You asked me whether or not I put all five stars when I rated your last chapter. If you look closely, there is only 4.9 stars there. If you don't see it, you're clearly a complete idiot.

Also, you spelled "sadness" wrong in this chapter. 4.9 out of 5 stars. >:p



Author's Response:

I never said I wasn't an idiot. Though by your standards I'm only a 4.9 out of a 5 star idiot. There by making your comment about me being a "complete" idiot incorrect.

There you have it. You either give me a 5 star rating at being an idiot (there by breaking your promise of never giving me a 5 star rating), or admit you were an idiot for inaccurately calling me a "complete" idiot.

That's right, I know chess. The next move is yours. >:p

Also thank you for the compliment on my writing.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 8:01 PM Title: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.

So touching, Amy will actually have someone she'll miss. It must be really bad if she thinks that leaving town to be stuck with the military is better. Still no backstory and I don't hate her for the outburst. She is just hurting and needs to let it out. 

 Hopefully her father will shed some light on the real Amy Jackson. Also I don't know if it is a good idea but Ben might want to tell her how he really feels before they take her away and it becomes impossible. 

  Also, we might learn more about he feels about the three boys, particularly Ben. Also, I hope her backstory comes out because it is killing me not knowing all of this!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 7:46 PM Title: I Don't Know What To Do Except Nothing.

This was great.. Can't wait to hear what Amy's Dad's gonna say

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