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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 7:29 AM Title: Free Samples

Yes, you did. Refreshingly so! Stabbing her tongue?! Definitely a new one.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 6:23 AM Title: Free Samples

You spelled "albeit" wrong. Zero stars...

I'm not really a fan of vore. Or feet. Or abuse. I do like it when a small protagonist fights back; that makes things interesting. Although, I hope Ben gets Amy to become a better person.

Just to reiterate, I fucking love this story. But still, zero stars.



Author's Response:

Spelling man, my fucking kryptonite. Sorry.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 9:20 PM Title: Free Samples

The Brave Little Tailor.

 

A nice surprise, don't see a lot of tongue stabbings these days.



Author's Response:

Not gonna lie, that made me laugh just reading it.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 8:45 PM Title: Free Samples

Amy isn't as durable as I thought if a pen could hurt her.  Now with her pride and body hurt by Ben, what will she do? She is not an evil giantess, I don't get that vibe from her. 

  She is a very lonely person who got hurt badly in the past and this is her only defence. I have a feeling that as her aura of invincibility fades, she is going to turn from bully to victim as some truly terrible people target her. 

  Whatever you're doing, this is brilliant ! I can't wait to see what you have in store in for the four of them. Ben and his friends are so likeable and Amy is too despite what she has done so far.



Author's Response:

She is durable, that's why he had to stab her tongue. I imagine it would be the equivalency to a tongue piercing for her.

Thanks so much for sticking with the story so far. It means a lot to know you enjoy it.

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 8:29 PM Title: Free Samples

Really digging this chapter and this series as a whole. Glad his friends didn't abandon him and in fact gave him the right idea to strike back at her. Of course this might mean they're on the hit list too now if she was paying attention.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 7:41 PM Title: Free Samples

Damn that was sexy! Mouth play is one of my favorite aspects of gts. So glad you included that!

Two chapters in one day?! Is it the constant 5 star ratings? Because I'm willing to keep 'em coming if that's what it takes, and I'd emplore my fellow readers and reviewers to do the same.

Stabbing Amy with a pen? Hilarious! His friends seemed concerned for his safety, but they still advised him to do it, which strikes me as strange. And then after his terrifying(for him of course...I would've loved it) ordeal, they say he can spend the rest of the day at school in his gym clothes. With friends like these...

And I'm not into vore either, but mouth play is a completely different idea if it's done correctly, which this totally was!

Ok, I'll stop now. I need sleeeep.



Author's Response:

Hey if it were my friend I'd advise the same thing. And yeah they tell him to wear his gym clothes. His normal clothes are saliva-ish, and its not like they have a spare change of clothes on them. The options are either gym clothes or his saliva clothes. And they took him to the nurse so he's not walking around the school in gym clothes.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 7:37 PM Title: Free Samples

Interesting... Still not sure about Amy... If she really wanted to hurt Ben l, she could've done worse., but on the other hand, maybe she's making this whole ordeal slow and painful for him.?

Author's Response:

She's not out to hurt him. She's out to humiliate him in front of everybody.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 7:37 PM Title: Free Samples

Interesting... Still not sure about Amy... If she really wanted to hurt Ben l, she could've done worse., but on the other hand, maybe she's making this whole ordeal slow and painful for him.?

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