[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 10:24 AM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
I kind of like were this story is headed. Amy feels isolated, and it's part of her defense to be seen by those who see her as different as also someone powerful. Ben helps the first part while also hurting the second. I'm rooting for him in the eventual showdown.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 9:16 AM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
Wow. This chapter is excellent...and that was my thought before he even fell asleep. I'm rally liking Ben's character, and his bravery. It feels all too real.
His relationship with his mother and sister is quite touching as well, and the fact that he didn't tell them right away what happened for the sake of sympathy or possibly protection shows even more about him.
As for the dream. His arousal is warranted because of her size, beauty, and power. But I hope it's not because she crushed him so easily. That should be the focus of his fear.
Amy's got a plan, eh? So the kidnapping might not be for a while, or not at all for that matter. This has to be public. And while she could just grab him in front of all the students and say: "He's coming with me, and you won't even recognize him when I bring him back." It feels like she's got something a bit more extravagent in store. Then again...that could totally work.
Anyways, this was my favorite chapter by far. Keep up the fantastic work. I'm eager to see more.
Author's Response:
Uh...wow. Damn. Sorry it's just that when I joined this site like a week ago I didn't think anybody would enjoy my writing so much. I came just to get some ideas out of my head. The fact that you enjoy this so much really means a lot. Thank you. I'll try my hardest not to disappoint.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 8:05 AM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
Let me guess what the first chapter of that book is entitled: "HOW TO DRESS LIKE A CHEERLEADER...AND ABDUCT A LITTLE MAN WITH YOUR GIANT POM-POMS."
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 4:46 AM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
I really, really like this series. And you're updating it daily, which I really have to give props for! I like the complexity of Amy's character, the likeability of Ben's character, and the lack of uselessness of the side characters. I like it when the story puts plot before eroticism, so I'm really digging this.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2014 10:27 PM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
I'm definitely curious as to where this goes.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2014 9:18 PM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
Great chapter. This story is really coming along quite well. I absolutely love Ben's relationship with his little sister, Katelyn, it brings a certain realism to a giantess story I haven't seen yet or can't remember.(reminds me of my little sister and how I would do anything for her)
aaron
PS also like how the chapter ended because of where it might lead.
Date: April 25 2014 8:58 PM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
This chapter was better than the last one. There both so confused and conflicted! Tis adorable. I expect their next confrontation to be exciting and gradious!
[Report This]Date: April 25 2014 8:58 PM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
This was an awesome chapter. Can't wait to see if Amy goes through with whatever plan she has up hers leave, or if she'll bail.
Seems like she has some kind of attraction for Ben, so I'm guessing she'll back out of the plan, but we'll have to wait I guess.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2014 8:46 PM Title: Eyes Open or Closed. Either Way There's No Escape.
Ben is scared yet so aroused? Alright, not my place to criticse his choice in women. His friends are great in sticking by him but it might count for nothing in the end since they can barely lift Amy's finger and when she counter attacks they could just as easily run with their tails between their legs.
As for Amy, she doesn't get sick? Someone should look into that, it is fascinating. Before her anger took control, I could tell that she was happy to feel normal. The girl is lonely, she was definitely bullied in elementary school as she grew. Ben scolding her like she was a regular person made her feel good and if she can look past the humiliation and anger she felt, Amy might have found her soulmate. Also, I hope Ben is ready for the storm thats coming. His crush might just literally crush him.
Author's Response:
Don't forget man, we're all here because we've got a thing for giantesses. But I'll bet you that if anyone here were to actually face one in person they would feel the exact some combination of emotions. Fear and arousal.
As for your assessment of Amy that's pretty insightful of you. But now the question remains of which feeling is stronger. The urger to feel normal again or a lifetime of feeilng dominant over everybody? Either way thank you for enjoying my work.