[Report This]Date: March 27 2015 6:20 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
By the way, soldiers only salute officers not enlisted. When a soldier is talking to a NCO they got to the position of at ease.
Date: October 04 2014 10:13 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
So, any progress on the group of chapters?
Date: September 24 2014 5:28 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
So any idea when the 1st chapter will be ready?
Author's Response:
Well the thing is I want to write out a bunch of chapters before hand so I'm not posting anything with gaping plot holes.
Date: September 21 2014 8:01 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
@DarienFawkes... That's awesome to hear! And really?. Surprised you'd say that. Seems like most people loved it! If rank it up there with some of the bigger stories coming out now like downtrodden
Author's Response:
Well it was my first story so it didn't come out the same way I wanted it to. Now I've learned my lesson: type everything on a Google Docs first and save it, and never try to write one chapter everyday. That was exhausting and the quality suffered because I would rush. So I'm going to be taking a lot of time on these new chapters.
I agree with you, Downtrodden is gonna be big. Hope my sequel comes together as smoothly.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 11:44 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Any idea as to when the sequel for this story will be out now that your latest story is completed?
Author's Response:
I've just started working on it. I'm sorry to say it will take a while to finish. I have some awesome ideas I want to incorperate but I need time to try and piece everything out so it's not one big mess of "shit happened"
I love that you're interested to know. I didn't even think it was all that good.
Date: August 29 2014 9:51 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
That's awesome to hear!... Can't wait to read the sequel!
[Report This]Date: June 12 2014 7:18 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Still planning a sequal ?
Author's Response:
He'll yeah I am but it's gonna take a while. Right now I've just started a different story and I want to finish it before going on to something else. If you're into shrinking then check it out. Thanks for the support.
[Report This]Date: May 29 2014 10:48 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I'm usualy more interested in shrinking stories over giantess stories, but I gotta say this story had me hooked. You do such an awesome job at creating very real and fleashed out charaters, that story preferance fall to side and you just find your self sucked into the story.
Date: May 26 2014 6:36 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
So, any idea when the sequel will be out?
Also. Any plans to have other giantesses/giants in the sequel besides Amy?
Author's Response:
The sequal won't be out for a while since I want to focus on another story idea I've had for a long time.
And nope, sorry. This story is about Amy living life as the ultimate outcast, a giantess in a world of normal sized humans. If I were to add another giantess then that takes away from the main source of conflict: everyone learning to accept Amy, Amy learning to accept herself, and Ben and Amy figuring out their feelings for each other.
Date: May 16 2014 10:45 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Also, if you want to bounce ideas around with someone, I wouldn't mind giving you a hand.
Date: May 16 2014 9:04 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Awesome! I'd really love to see the character back! Amy is such a sweetie, I'm glad she got a second chance and is taking it! I'm looking forward to whatever you have planned!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 11:23 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Awesome new chapter, as usual! Loved the character development for Amy you did in this chapter, all of the random acts of kindness she did was a great addition to the story! As usual, looking forward to your next chapter
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 7:41 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Aww, what a nice chapter. It's obvious that if Amy wanted to she could do a lot more good than harm. The people of the town just gave her a chance to do that, now will she take it?
I can't wait for another update!
Date: May 09 2014 2:16 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I have a theory about Ben's observation on why Amy's parents live in a small house with seemingly no servants. Amy's expenses are all paid by her parents and this is causing a serious drain on their finances.
After some years of Amy being a giantess, they had to move to a smaller house and live less like billionaires in order to avoid bankruptcy. Amy may or may not know this but if she does, it is probably making her feel worse as she may feel like a burden to her parents.
This means no servants as well as they cannot afford them but the furniture is because they got it when she was smaller and they just moved it over. Am I right?
[Report This]Date: May 09 2014 1:22 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Another awesome update! This is definitely one of my must reads on the site. Really cool development you got going on now. The parents were a cool touch, and I'm glad they moved the trio into action. Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: May 08 2014 9:07 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Beautiful chapter, there are spelling errors but I won't pick on it. So I was right, Amy got bullied early in her growth spurt and she responded by distancing everyone, even her parents.
If Ben loves her and wants a chance with her, saving her from the town and also herself may do the trick. He is pretty much the only person left who can make everything right. Show everyone the picture since apparently no one remembers a normal sized Amy and if a victim can forgive Amy for it, maybe everyone else should.
I think her parents might be afraid of her, they just don't want to say it. Not as scared as the town but there is fear.
@storysmith, Daniel is right. Amy should hear it but it might lead her to accept her fate. She shouldn't, there is so much she can do but she needs to find the will to fight on.
I was worried when you didn't update, thought something happened. Thats how much I like this story!
Date: May 04 2014 9:30 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I think a lot of people can relate to feeling like an outcast or a freak. Amy is just unfortunate that what makes people label her as one is right out in the open. I am sure her father can't be taking this well. Either that or he is glad to have Amy finally removed from him and the talk is to tell them not to do anything next week.
[Report This]Date: May 04 2014 9:25 PM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
I think the thing that really stood out for me in this chapter were the soldiers's reactions to Amy's outburst. A lot of people like to write off soldiers as cold harded and unfeeling, so the fact that they can relate to and feel pity for her is a mark of good writting! I'm really digging this story, I'm eager to see where things go from here!
Date: May 03 2014 7:51 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
@chlorez, good question. Where the hell are her parents and what do they think of her? She may be their flesh and blood but that may not stop them from fearing her like the rest of the town.
Amy would be like Beauty and the Beast but if the two were the same person. I can see the town forgiving her but she first has to admit the wrong she's done to everyone and apologise to each one of her victims. Then a lengthy period where she helps the town with whatever they need, something her giantness will come in handy for. Hopefully she will be able to integrate herself.
You know, at first I thought the title was directed at Amy but increasingly it might be the people around her who turned her into what she is today.
Date: May 03 2014 1:00 AM Title: Being Picked On and Picked Up.
Fortunately for her, being scared shows that she is not evil. Unfortunately, most people don't feel the same way.