[Report This]Date: March 05 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Food
Wow! I still wan't to be invited out on a blind date with that princess's sweet buds of taste! haha :)
I am actually, thinking of submitting a chapter or 2 toard this wonderful story. :)
Author's Response:
If you would like I would be delighted to see what you have in mind! Just send it to my email address which you can find everywhere and I'll put it in a folder. I plan on putting something new up after I finish editing the original story so that Melanie and her fun can continue for much more time than she was given. ^^
--HK
Date: March 05 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Food
Yes! A NEW chapter! I’m super excited to see where this newfound relationship between Sarah and David is going. How’s Melanie going to react? Will she grant a pardon to Sarah and not eat her? Will she be upset that there’s another woman in David’s life? Maybe she would be jealous… Oh man, I love this story a lot and I especially love this new potential conflict. Great job as always!
Author's Response:
I wasn't very sure how my audience would take to it, but maybe it was good! Conflic is something I've always been lacking and I'm trying to do my best to learn and fix it! Afterall, I have great plans and I need some practice before I get into the thick of it! Haha; thanks again!
--HK
[Report This]Date: March 04 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Just Food
Wonderful chapter, wonderful story, wonderful series. I think it's wonderful but that's just me. Having this story be out this long, it was a shock to have a brand new chapter.
Author's Response:
And a whole new sub-plot? I'm listening to my reviews and I'm trying to make the story a better one since this is my final attempt at making it complete! Thanks again for the review and rating! ^^
--HK