Date: April 26 2014 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Question, why did they say if he doesn't get the injection he be dead within minutes? What would have killed him?
Author's Response:
His immune system can't cope with the bacteria on Home so they had to inject him with a chemical that helped boost his immune system. I'll explain it in the story soon don't worry.
Author's Response:
His immune system can't cope with the bacteria on Home so they had to inject him with a chemical that helped boost his immune system. I'll explain it in the story soon don't worry.
Date: April 22 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I was a big fan if your work on writing.com, and I'm glad to see you on here. If you're active now, I wonder if the sequel is also done or farther along then it was 2 years ago.
Author's Response:
I wasn't planning on re-writing the sequel. Instead I was doing a fantasy spin-off and prequel/short story series
Date: April 22 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Those who seem perfect always have some big flaws although her boobs aren't flaws, I think we'll find out as we go along.
Date: April 21 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I do enjoy reading this story. I believe I mentioned that in the initial paragraph of review.
Date: April 21 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Jessica is kind of a Mary Sue. I read the original long ago so I don't remember much, but is Jess bad at anything in particular? So far it seems like she could pick up a violin her size and be a pro at it in a day or two.
Not that this kind of character is bad or anything, just thought I'd point it out. So far the only thing she's bad at is looking at her own feet on account of how large her boobs are XD.
Author's Response:
There are some things that she is bad at but I haven't mentioned them yet.
Date: April 20 2014 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I always have problems imagining her but I guess somewhere from DD to E should be fine.
Author's Response:
Yeah somewhere around that size.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
This is giving me a chance to reread this story from the start, should be fun. Just asking, what is Jessica's cup size? If she were normal sized but had the same proportions what would their size be?
Author's Response:
I'm not too sure. I don't know that much about cup sizes but let's just say even if she were normal they would be big.
Date: April 19 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I saw this story on Giantess City and was enjoying it so I'm really happy to see it here! I wanted to comment on it but I don't think the forum system is appropriate for reading stroes. It's nice to see that you're rewriting bit because when I read it the first time I did noticde a few mistakes (but not many). Reason I didn't comment is because the forum is annoying for commenting on stories in my opinion.
Date: April 19 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Sweet! I was a big fan of the original so I'm happy to read a rewrite! Hopefully some things happen a little differently for those of us who read the original but either way I'm still in!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
I loved this Story on writing.com, good to see someone's rewriting it here. :D
[Report This]Date: April 19 2014 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Nice first chapter, look forward to the next one
[Report This]Date: April 19 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings
Well you did it! Let me be the first to review it and say that this is just an amazing story! So far it seems to be geared towards something very different from the old one but I am getting ahead of myself since those chapters haven't been uploaded here yet.
Author's Response:
Thank you I already have 17 chapers completed with an additional 1-2 completed each week. I will upload them once a day until all completed chapers are online.
Author's Response:
Thank you I already have 17 chapers completed with an additional 1-2 completed each week. I will upload them once a day until all completed chapers are online.