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Reviewer: Michael1258 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2014 11:05 AM Title: Digging in the Dirt

ok the ear part is a little odd, but not in a bad way. you mad some good progress from last story. Id suggest maybe introduce new characters. either get sam lost on some small adventure or have lucrecia find a new guy. maybe let her experiment a bit more before she decides if she likes sam the bf or sam the pet. bar scenes are always fun and sexy. good luck and good job



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks man! Glad you think the story's coming along.  Yeah, the ear thing happened because it's unusual; I wanted to do something that isn't often seen in these sorts of stories.  New characters are definitely something I'm cooking up, it's just a question of who and why.  I've got some ideas, and I'll see how I can work them in.

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