Date: April 13 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, very sexy chapter. You're right, much more R-rated than your usual stuff but you did a nice job with it. I can't even imagine the amount of self-control that would take for Belena.
Date: April 13 2014 7:13 PM Title: Prologue
Oh Belena, I really love watching her and Lorek together. They are such a cute couple. Lorek and Valdan may be in trouble, can see Argo kidnapping them as revenge against Belena. Hope they won't be too helpless in this story.
Date: April 13 2014 7:19 AM Title: Prologue
So if there is a chapter 1 and 3 where is chapter 2?
Author's Response:
Oops! My mistake. Thanks for letting me know, i just corrected it.
Date: April 13 2014 2:20 AM Title: Prologue
Legitsauce! I love the vandan series as well. Its a good change of pace from all the sci-fi gts weve been getting on this site recently. Not that theres anything wrong with sci-fi, but fantasy setting are nice too!
Author's Response:
Thanks, i enjoy both kinds of stories, but fantasy is my favourite.
Date: April 06 2014 10:23 AM Title: Prologue
So, when will the 3rd chapter come out? And do you think you could write my character in?
Author's Response:
The 3rd chapter has just been posted! Since I'd already planned this story out ahead, I'm probably not gonna include your character. Sorry! I'll see if I can fit something similar into the story later, without changing the plot I'd already envisaged.
Date: March 28 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cute chapter. I love the idea of tying a sash to Belena's finger and another around Lorek's waist. The wedding guests being on a tabletop is a nice touch too. I wonder if we'll see any other giantess-style wedding traditions. Cutting the cake? The first dance? Removing the garter to throw to the bachelors? Lots of possibilities.
Author's Response:
I'm not gonna linger on the wedding, since I want to move this story along before it takes me forever to complete. But there will be something special in the next chapter.
Date: March 28 2014 4:16 PM Title: Prologue
So far so goor but Argo will probably ruin all this sooner or later. The ogres may be big but still smaller than the giantesses. Although I doubt Belena and Sylvie have ever fought so many or even been in a war so will even things out.
Author's Response:
You're quite right, there are a LOT of ogres, and neither of the princesses have any real battle experience.
Date: March 28 2014 3:07 PM Title: Prologue
This story is back! That's super awesome! I'm worried though cause when stories start off happy that just means things will only get worse for them from here on.
Author's Response:
Not always, but in this case I think you're right.
Date: March 28 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see the story starts off as a happy one. Would of kinda been mad if the golems has attacked during the wedding
[Report This]Date: March 24 2014 5:24 PM Title: Prologue
Awesome. Great to see your stories again. I can't wait for the action.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll try and not waste too much time in getting some writing done.
Date: March 24 2014 3:53 PM Title: Prologue
Sweet, a sequel! The Vandan series is my favorite as well so I was very excited to see this. Can't wait to see where this goes. An evil prince with an army of ogres reminds me of the Jack the Giant Slayer movie but I'm sure you'll craft a much more satisfying take on that scenario (for us GTS fans at least).
Author's Response:
Well, I hope my tale will be satisfying, since in my opinion that movie was not too good (in addition to being a missed opportunity with regards to GTS scenes). I didn't think of the movie while writing this chapter, but I can see the similarities now (the orb being like the crown, etc.)
[Report This]Date: March 24 2014 1:01 PM Title: Prologue
Dont know how this isnt compatible with what i suggested but still great
[Report This]Date: March 24 2014 8:44 AM Title: Prologue
Yes! The Vandan series is by far my favorite of your stories. I'm not liking the destruction Argo is planning to cause. At the same time it should be interesting to see the giantesses deal with an actual challenge. This should be good. Also, does the time skip mean we might actually see Belena's wedding?
Author's Response:
Yes, Belena's wedding will be in this story. As will a lot of other stuff ;)
[Report This]Date: March 24 2014 8:13 AM Title: Prologue
Yay, another sequel! Children of Vandan felt a little rushed at the back end, hope this one is allowed more time to develop. Argo eh? Guess he still remembers what Belena did to him and is itching for revenge.
He's left out their brother Valdan if that is his name but it might be unwise to underestimate their normal sized sibling. He could prove to be the difference in the coming war since his smaller size would allow him to blend in with the masses and use stealthier methods. Hope Sylvie treats him better after that adventure and Belena is enjoying her marriage.
Author's Response:
Sylvie and Valdan do get along, though not always - but she does respect him a lot more now. Belena isn't married yet, but she will be soon. The reason Argo didn't think of Valdan in his revenge plans is because A) he's never met Valdan and B) he doesn't consider him a threat. But we'll see what happens later...