Date: February 17 2014 12:11 PM Title: Prologue
Hi, I gave you my blessing in a response to your review of my story "Empowerment." When I wrote that I hadn't really looked at your story yet. I didn't realize that you had lifted entire chunks of text from my original work. It's one thing to write a story that uses the same premise as the one I wrote, It's another to outright copy my text. Please edit your story so that it no longer so completely copies my text. I am also posting this in your thread at Giantesss City.
Author's Response:
This is a rewrite, and there are lines in the original that I thought were just absolutely perfect and needed no alteration. I've been sure to credit you both here and at GiantessCity, I'd hoped what was different outweighed what was the same enough that it'd stand on its own, but if it's still a problem... I dunno, tuning dialog in meaningless ways strikes me as arbitrary, I'll try if it bothers you, but there are parts that are impossible to change because there's no more perfect way to convey those moments.
Let me know specifically what you'd like to see changed via PM or in my thread over at GiantessCity and I'll do my best to accommodate you if I can.