Reviews For Holly the Freshman
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Reviewer: Vgaurd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 14

Not a huge fan of the male interactions but still love where this story is going. Can't wait for another chapter. Maybe could you try and include a chapter where holly goes inside of a boob?

Reviewer: moosecowboy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

Unexpected but very appreciated plot twist. Keep it going!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2017 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

Male interaction isn't my thing so I didn't really care for that part. But Hayley's rather wicked game was quite sexy. Like Danielle, I'm going to be in suspense about whose belly poor Linsey ended up inside.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was very tasty.  I never would have thought of that method of rescuing Holly, but it worked beautifully.  I almost feel sorry for Diane.

Hayley is definitely the most devious person on campus; I'm sure if she ever came across Susan's webcam channel, she'd get some nasty ideas.

Reviewer: Dr McKay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

Glad to see you haven't given up on this story.

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