Reviews For Holly the Freshman
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Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm really enjoying this story. You should continue with playful vore and such. I want to see Susan swallowing many shrunken women :-)

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 9

I love this chapter it really paints a good picture of what is going on I love vore so very near digestion was so sexy. I hope to see more soon!! One criticism I do have is if chapters could be updated a little faster maybe? I know it takes time to make brilliance like this so it's not important :)

- frankie

Reviewer: Trisar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2014 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

Very nice chapter. Looking forward to the next one--curious about how Linsey managed to get out!

Reviewer: Olo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

My favorite bit was the quiet and muffled scream when Susan swallowed in her sleep.  Too bad the camera died just before that.  If Susan knows her audience, she can edit it in during post.

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