Date: January 19 2019 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yo everytime you update I just go "so glad you're alive" lol, although not sure if Holly will be alive soon `~`. Always awesome when you post, love the way you describe the mental struggle in the one eating and the gradual dehumanization of the one eaten when the predator feels more of their fighting. Call me sick but I've always been a fan of unwilling/forced vore on the predator and it's not written about enough so I was glad to see you put that in for this chapter. Looking forward to your next chapter! Hope it won't be too long though.
Date: August 08 2018 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Jfc I just read all of it and bless you my friend it was a vore fan's dream! So glad I found this and can't wait for more of your work and vore galore. Seriously though goddamn, like the idea of vore is enticing as is but the moral debate as different preds swallow the girls when done well can make it 10x sexier and I think you nailed it pretty well
Date: December 11 2017 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap, an update to one of my favorite vore series ever. I always hold out hope that you'll eventually get back to it :D
Good work as always, though! I look forward to see what happens next! Personally I enjoy the darker side of vore (it is vore after all) but I think it's your writing style which really draws me in the most, more so than whether or not it's dark.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2017 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really hoping you post an update soon. This story is awesome and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Date: November 03 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
MOOOOOORE OMG I LUV U
[Report This]Date: August 17 2016 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good to see you're back, this was my favourite story by far.
[Report This]Date: May 03 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
What an amazing way to return to this story. This chapter was written great, and I loved the interaction between the two tiny girls. I have been hoping for Diane to get Holly alone again, and I can't wait to see what happens there. I'll be looking forward to the next installment. Also, I just got done reading all your stuff on Eka's, and I really enjoyed all of it as well.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2015 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, the greatest story of all times is back again!! What a wonderful surprise :-)
I wish it was updated more frequently, it's just the best story here by far
Date: February 12 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, I understand completely, your personal life should always take priority. I'll definitely be looking forward to it though, when you do have the chance to finish. Also, there's nothing wrong with making sure something is canon for a fetish story. They're just as good as any other kind of writing, no reason you can't establish canon.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just re-read this for the 10th+ time, and I still can't get enough. Both this and the Alternate Tales are great stories. I'm eagerly awaiting your next additions to both, I hope they're coming soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Due to several things going on in my personal life, I haven't been afforded much time to dedicate to writing in a while. I do have the next chapter like, 90% done, as well as another alternate/side story. I still need to edit it though. I'll release it after this next chapter since it can fit into the canon of the story. As odd as that sounds for a fetish story. Haha
Date: July 31 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Read later
[Report This]Date: February 21 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent! More please
Date: February 18 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please don't abandon this story. I've loved each chapter and I'm looking forward to more. Thank you.
Author's Response:
I'm not planning on abandoning it. I just haven't had much free time to write. I did just post a new chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this story. It has good writing, well made characters so far and the scnenes that people want are always written well. Congrats!
[Report This]Date: January 23 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE this story! Do you have any others posted on another site?
Author's Response: I do. I've posted other stories on Eka's portal under the same name. I'll have the next chapter for this story up in the next couple of days as well. I'm glad you're liking it so far.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the story so far, it's really sexy a Nd well written :) hope to see more
Date: January 18 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story. Please continue.
Date: January 17 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this so far. Please continue! I assume based on the first chapter that Holly gets out somehow, right?
Date: January 17 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this! I'm excited to see where this goes! I'm a big fan of F/F digestion! Keep it up!
Date: January 15 2014 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
The concept's very cool. A modern-day Thumbelina trying to survive college. I'm not sure about Danielle though. Would anyone really be that hungry that they start eating toy suitcases? Bugs, maybe, that at least is organic. But random plastic items?
It felt unrealistic and obviously fetish-y. But then, this is a fetish story so maybe that's okay. I was just a little distracted by it. Sorry to over-analyze. That's just my two cents.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I plan to address Danielle's, let's say quirky, fetish-ness within the next chapter or two. Suffice to say for right now she enjoys the feeling full, and doesn't always leave things to be digested. I hope that explains it a little bit.