[Report This]Date: August 30 2014 7:18 AM Title: Sisters - Part 5
So many things to say and so many good comments already written...
Nvm that it's one of the best chapters in oneofthe best stories on this site; that single sentence at the end means - at least! - that we've been misunderstanding Claire's words so many times (including the clues in the previous chapter :)
I'll probably have to reread a lot of this...
Chapeau
[Report This]Date: August 11 2014 1:04 AM Title: Sisters - Part 5
it's nice to see Stephanie getting her humanity back little by little but I am not sure where you are going with the last bit of back and forth.
Looking forward to finding out though.
Date: August 11 2014 12:02 AM Title: Sisters - Part 5
Am sorry to say, that am not liking how over powered you are making the omegas, they seem to be running around with nothing to stop them from focing their will on everyone.
They can do all these things and now they can't die, is b.s to me. I was never a fan of the omegas as most of them we seen are by foce and fear are trying to foce Alphas to change. Yeah the Alphas need to change how they see betas but the omegas are doing no better by focing their wills on Alphas.
If you said the omegas live to around 300 years would make them a little less over powered not this not dieing b.s that had to be thrown on everything else they can do.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2014 6:39 PM Title: Sisters - Part 5
Wow double the impact here. Really have to break my response into two.
Well first the Stephanie bits, which can be summed up in the phrase "And it wasn't fair" which drives to the heart of it. There's a definite jealousy on Stephanie's part and it's heartbreaking. Something along the lines of 'I was a closer size to him and loved him just as much, so why is my brother dead?. Aside from the Omega's just natural advantages it's just bad luck and it is unfair.
Now the other relation, phew that was a big one. It had been implied with Melody and Corey that they wouldn't have much time together but I assumed it was because of Beta life span. NOPE. Wow living forever sounds great on paper until you realize your going to get to watch every non Omega die. No wonder they have to keep their population in check.
It really amps up the tragic aspect, and makes the reason for the library clear. Compared to what will be almost an eternity for Claire's life Corey's life will be a blip. It's damn important that she never forget him and cherish him while he's around.
Date: August 10 2014 6:30 PM Title: Sisters - Part 5
Never dying huh? Sounds like both a blessing and a curse. But it's obvious which of the two Claire sees it as...
It's crazy though. As if Omega's in this universe couldn't be more overpowered than they already are, now they can live forever too? Jeez.
I think if I lived in the univese as a Beta or Alpha I'd be hella jealous of Omega's. But if I was an Omega I think I'd have trouble staying sane.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2014 6:14 PM Title: Sisters - Part 5
So essentially Omegas are gods then, no one to prey on them and that means they'll always be there to watch over Betas. They're here to stay but that means Claire might record all this so that when Corey is gone, she'll have some thing to watch. Something to remember him by.
How would they control the population? Surely there has to be a way to stop too many Omegas from being born so that resources aren't squandered on them.