[Report This]Date: December 25 2013 5:01 PM Title: Dreams become nightmares
Megan seems to be coming into her own. (Maggy,) I like that 'nick-name', she has the mental edge over her younger, step-son, and she's just begining to realize how erotic it can be to become a giantess...
Your discription of how she looks, through the eye's of her love-sick step son, and his awkward way of trying to keep it a secret from her really built her up nicely, she has tp be the most beautiful woman in the world! Great stuff!
Shrinking him was kind of a casual thing, for her- but, after inadvertantly discovering his 'secret' writing's. she just had to... Ha!
I really enjoyed the set-up for this, although not really into the 'foot-thing' to this extent, it still has the full effect of a dominant step mother giantess fantasy.
Great work, I definitely want to read more... ;`)
Author's Response:
Wow. Thanks for the awesome critique.
I am mostly a foot guy myself but don't worry, there will be a couple of chapters down the road about butt and I have a really erotic incertion arc in mind for later.