Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 14: Prettiest Doll of All

Love the :niceness" of Maggie. I really hope she starts neing her usual "nice" self when scot is being punished. Also I hope the two friends are just as "nice". I must say I love the work up. You can almost fell her anxiety. I can see her quvering just wanting to call him a toy or doll. It must be frustrating playing it smotthe. I bet Maggie will not hold out long. Her bitchiness WILL break out and when it does..., lets just say I will [slightly] feel  sorry for scott. Great chapter to break maggie in.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  And you can expect to see Maggie's truer self come out in the next couple chapters.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 13: Maggie's Sock Clock

Oh ho I cannot wait to see what she has planned for not following her "reasonable" request. I have a feeling scott will dred not listening to Maggie. I also have a feeling this will not be a first for Scott, not listening to Maggie I mean. Great chapter, I love how Maggie cannot resist to just trample him. Cannot wait to see where this goes from here.

Author's Response:

Let's just say you're right that Scott probably should've listened to Maggie, but when has he ever?  Hope you enjoy what's coming up.  Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 12: Breaking Amends

You kind of have a way to make us feel bad for everyone at-least once in your stories...then you remind us he's killed somebody via drunk driving.

 

Go Maggie!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I want Scott to seem at least relatable, given that he's the protagonist, but I'm not letting him off the hook for what he did at the beginning.

Reviewer: carnaj2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 12: Breaking Amends

First off I want to say that I am enjoying this series and this particular storyline immensely. I've been reading the stories since you first started the series and I've liked the way it's developed. I also wanted to add that I think your writing has improved remarkably over the many, many chapters you have written. Very few mistakes in things like punctuation and spelling, etc., and your style has become more fluid.

You make the characters believable as well; each with their own distinct personality and speech patterns. Your descriptions are good and plot-wise everything seems well thought out, such as Scott's moving on to college and the mother's involvement in getting the law passed, etc.

As to the Giant/M/m wariness, I've noticed that as well, both here and on other 'different fetish' sites. I think you handled it wisely; simply noting M/m interaction beforehand to warn those who do not want to read it to skip the chapter. Personally though I agree with you in your thoughts on supporting characters, and especially male supporting cast. Showing both sexes gives the story and the world that it is written in a firmer sense of reality in my opinion, making it even more believable, despite the fantastic circumstances of the story's theme- shrinking.

Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for reading/reviewing!  I appreciate what you said about my writing style; I'd like to think I've marginally improved over the 2.5 years I've been writing for the site.  I've been trying hard to make the environment of the story feel as real as possible in character background and action so that the reader can just focus on the fantastical shrinking elements.  In this case, acknowledging the presence of a giant guy was one way of doing that, without necessarily turning it into some twisted M/m scenario.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life of the Party

Pretty good chapter... Can't wait for the next one... I hope it gets put up either tonight or tomorrow ... Ready to read more

Author's Response:

It'll be out soon, as I'm almost done with the revisions to the story.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: PoweredByCaffeine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue

Great job again! The kiss part was very well done, and I like how Scott is 1 inch tall. I think that's the perfect size for him ;)

Really looking forward to Maggie making an appearance!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  You can probably expect to see Scott at 1 inch tall frequently in the future of this series.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 11: On the Tip of Her Tongue

Great chapter always like the dream sequences, they kin of let us know more what the characters really want. Wow, this dream speaks alot. this sentence '“Thanks, Mommy,” Scott stated simply, a smile on his lips"' makes me wonder if he really want/wish that Jugy want put him in her mouth. I also cannot wait for maggie. I know she won't be quite so subtle in her "reasonable" requests and thats what I would like to see. I like Judy's cleverness, but Maggie seems (from the other stories) as if she would take the sruleness to a new level.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you like the dreams.  While Scott doesn't consciously want to be put in Judy's mouth, I certainly do want readers to wonder what's buried deep in his psyche.  And Maggie's going to start things off with an unsubtle bang when she shows up, as you'll see soon.

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life of the Party

I am a big fan of the dream sequences, as it allows you to do things to a chaacter that you don't plan to have them experince in "the real world." As you know, I'm a fan of the death-by-smelly-feet scenario, so if you're able and willing, maybe writing a dream sequence with that little scene at the feet of Judy or the sister would be great. Thanks for continuing this series.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Though this will be the only dream sequence in this story, there may be more down the road that explore ideas like that, given the heavy foot-focus of this series.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: A Little Smooch on the Cheek

Zephilia said it best.

Now I'll go and save the current version :)

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 10: A Little Smooch on the Cheek

Love the new chapter. and the last sentence "...current activity qualified as whatever surprise punishment his mother had in store..." has me thinking we'll meet her real nature soon and cannot wait to see what she has perpared for him. I also cannot wait for interaction between Scott and Maddie. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Scott and Maggie's interaction is coming up in one or two chapters.  And Judy's definitely got more on her mind than appears on the surface, as will be seen in a later chapter.