Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2013 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's difficult to write dialogues like these without screwing up in some way -- either the characters  sound stupid, or go so fast that the readers will miss the details (if there are!), or it loses its grip as it goes on.

You managed to stay out of all three (plus others I didn't think of), and do so consistently for as long as the story lasted... if I were a writer I'd have my hat in my hand right now.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!  I appreciate that.  It was definitely challenging to keep their conversation going smooth, despite Olivia knowing he was going to die before she left the table.  I'd never seen a giantess story where the two were joking about how his own death, so I tried it!  Thanks for the 5 stars.