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Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 2:59 PM Title: The Wave Crashes Ashore

Great job on this chapter. The imagery was pretty damn powerful. I thought I actually smelled the chick’s feet while reading the descriptions. Hope to see more!



Author's Response:

Thanks Gadget!  I really appreciate your comments.  Those feet will be taking her downtown in the next part!

Reviewer: Grayface Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2014 7:25 PM Title: The Wave Crashes Ashore

Holy snap part 2 was so very awesome! So was part 1. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Grayface, I'm glad you liked it.

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