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Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2016 1:45 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

And here I thought this story was done.....definitely glad that I was wrong :)

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 11:19 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

Fantastic Story.

Reviewer: Massivewomenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2016 10:27 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

This story is one the main reasons I made this account, this story is awesome. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2016 5:03 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

I loved the finale, so awesome to see Livia finally step out of Julia's bullying shadow!

Reviewer: zhengguoguangxi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2015 1:51 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

come on upgrade now~!

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 6:30 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

Hey! Nice to see this getting updated, especially since we both started our main stories roughly the same time, so it's funny to see them both getting revived at roughly same time too, heh!



Author's Response:

Thanks; yeah, funny how that works out. I love Broken Sky, though I admit I'm not quite caught up. Looks like it's time to do some reading!

Reviewer: Ravean Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2014 2:57 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

I am one of the Moderators of the OCMB.org Boards (LivingThing) for the GTS >Forum and recently I´ve been browsing old stories that users posted. Some were good, some were not that good... after all I wasn´t really able to find anything that knocked me out. I guess I read too much already the last 20 years... then I browsed the internet and I found your Story "Pax Romana" on GTSWorld. I couldn´t stop reading it until I was finished (Chapter28)... This story is sooo fantatsic ... I love it, love it, love it. Here my pleas to you... please keep on writing... I am addicted to this story... and maybe throw in mor underfoot crushing... i love the unaware crushes and the casual walkovers the best... it´s so brilliantly careless. Some more butt action or even insertion would be wonderful. Thanx alot for this fantastic masterpiece.



Author's Response:

Thanks, it means a lot! Sorry for the (extremely) late reply, I'm trying to spend more time writing again.

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 8:29 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

If its true that killing someone while you're on red spice, absorbs their soul and makes you more powerful, ithe mass killings make sense now.  You had me convinced that Red spice turned women into homicidal monsters.  Granted, I still don't approve of the wholesale slaughter and cheapening of human life.  But now if there's a motive behind the killing besides spreading fear . . .   It gives me hope that Livia can maintain her self control and still be a "good person".  If she can accumulate her power through volunteers and criminals, she might not fall too far behind her sister.

Good chapter and very informative!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2014 7:11 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

All I can say is that it would sadden me to see Livia sacrifice her beliefs as she takes the red spice and becomes a horny giantess. Maybe she'll be able to fight it but I doubt it. Oh well, this has been a good read. 

Reviewer: scrymgeour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 2:49 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

Wonderful concept, kudos for taking on historical stuff, and great, blue ribbon writing, even though I'm not much for growth and physical violence (for the most part, shrinking and psychological violence is more my thing). 

Anyway, it doesn't matter much, because just I'm happy to see any kind of story set in Rome -- as far as I know, it hasn't been done yet. (There was some writer awhile back, also a growth fan, who wrote some outrageous apocalyptic story about Lucrezia Borgia -- bloodthirsty, also (and blood-hungry, too, I guess)). But that's all that comes to mind.  

Best, scrymgeour 

Reviewer: Tiacoten11 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 6:43 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

 

Fantastic story. I love the world you have created and how you rewrite the History. Characters personalities are well defined, and I love all of them.

Another aspect I would like to highlight is that you keep the story very well balanced, I mean, there are all kind of material in its measure.

I´m a big giantess lover, like 50-60 feets or more, so I specially like the parts with this kind of giantesses. I also like vore more than another fetish. Those are the reasons why my fourite character is Cybele.

It would be amazing if you write a story of a Roman Banquet that were so common in these days, but, most important, I hope you keep it up and just go the same way as heretofore. As I said, fantastic story.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 4:56 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

Good so fare. Continue.


P.S. They didn't even have a concept of a frate train but continue

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 9:16 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

I have just read (and amended a little of...) the two parts of your story. I am not a lover of gigantic females...too fairy-story-like for me, ergo, I am, for my pleasure, changing the scenario to make it more realistic. The females, and girls alike, shall be 10 feet tall, and the males shall become a staple diet.

I cannot accept that many readers can get excited by such colossal girls. Well, there are those few that are... those who have given their comments. 

                       Realistically yours....A.B.  U.K. 

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2013 11:40 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

I bet Julia's going to get injured really badly or killed, clearing the way for her younger sister to inherit the throne; whom will become just as violent as her mother and sister after having the spice.



Author's Response:

We'll see. I'll have the next chapter uploaded over the next couple of days.

Reviewer: Rage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2013 1:56 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

Great story, love the attention given to all fetishes( I'm boob man myself so loved the part with kim), not just the authors favourite-the main downfall of stores on here. 

Can't wait for the next chapter so keep up the writing:) 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'll try to have the next chapter up soon.

Reviewer: Sad Midget Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 10:56 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

It's a great read. The one thing that I especially love that you don't favor ONE fetish. Like you don't put an excessive amount of crush or mouth play, you balance it out and I don't really see that very often. I like how you put in quite a bit of detail of how a woman looks. All in all, it's a great story and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: AlterniaGuy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 17 2013 6:34 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

Fantastic story. I appreciate the fact that you seem to care about the plot of your story just as much as the fetish parts, which is something I don't often find on here.

My only suggestion is that you try to add at least a few foot focused scenes (and by that I mean something as drawn out as your breast scenes rather than just a simple crush). While I understand that you personally are not into it, you should understand that most people here are, as feet are the most common fetish among males. It is your story and you are by no means required to accommodate all of your readers, but if you are really looking for a well-rounded story that will blow your readers away, it helps to include things that will please all audiences.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'll take your advice into consideration. Feet aren't really my thing, but I realize a lot of people on these sites are into them. I'll try and have more detailed foot interaction scenes in the future.

*As for feet being the most popular fetish... well, if breast attraction is considered a fetish, then it easily outstrips feet attraction as the most popular fetish. That said, since breasts are a secondary sexual characteristic, it's questionable whether or not they count as a fetish. There's some debate among sexual psychologists about whether breast and butt attraction should be considered fetishes, and the general consensus seems to be that they shouldn't. 

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2013 7:29 PM Title: The Twin Goddesses

First off I will say that I am not a fan of the, for lack of a better word, crueler side of this fetish. I tend to look for stuff on the gentler side. Saying that I absolutely cannot ignore a masterpiece such as this. Throwing my preferences away, I found this to be an amazing story and I hope that it continues.

Author's Response:

Thanks lancealot, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 8:47 AM Title: The Twin Goddesses

So finally, this masterpiece from Giantess City makes it way here!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review NoStory!

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