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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2013 8:30 PM Title: A Bitter Relief

Instantly one of my favorite stories! I found myself wanting her to be kept as her wash rag but thouroughly enjoyed the ending you wrote. I absolutely love how you painted the picture of how she was used to wash each body part and the both point of views was awesome, you don't see that enough in stories anymore. I loved how she wrung her rag out too, that was a nice touch, she treated her exactly how you would a real wash rag. Then being dumped in the toilet and urinated on was the perfect humilating end for her. Thank you very much for this! 

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