Date: April 03 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Oh Terra you naughty little girl!
[Report This]Date: April 03 2015 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 32
Yes! Finally! Cant wait for part 2!
[Report This]Date: January 13 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
ya know what? Terra and Icarus kinda remind me of Diane and King
[Report This]Date: January 10 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 31
Aw yeah! This was so great! Especially the cliffhanger!
Date: January 09 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Terra should find a way to get Mega Terra back, it was fun to have her around.
Author's Response: I laughed so hard when you said Mega Terra. She might come back later at some point, that or we'll get Giga Terra.
Date: January 04 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 30
Really looking forward to the next chapter
Date: January 03 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Wow what a great story!! Love the characters!! Can't wait for more updates!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2015 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 30
Ah a nice if not somewhat confusing back story of Icarus. Now some things are set in motion and I can't wait to see what befalls them on their journey. Just wish Terra's mom and sister would make a return.
aaron
Author's Response: What are the confusing parts so that I can help straighten themm out.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2015 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 30
So confused?? Is this the test chapter. Or is it a dream or something?
Author's Response: It is the test chapter showing when Icarus first woke up years ago.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2015 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
This was great! 10 out of 10! But please respond to my questions <8(
Author's Response: Send me an email at lancealot501@hotmail.com with your questions. If you, ve already sent one then just resend it.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
Nice. So next comes the chapter you sent us? Really cool way to implement it. And im really looking forward to seeing Nyarl appear. Sorry if I am being annoying, but after waiting for so long...
Date: January 01 2015 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 28
I would love to read the chapter. Is nyarl in it?
Date: December 31 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Chapter seemed good enough as is.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 28
Amazing chapter, it's been awhile but it was worth the wait. I didn't think that Terra would have had that great of a chance to win. I guess Icarus is really really special.
I love this story, and I'd be honored to test read your chapter.
Author's Response: Send an email to me at lancealot501@hotmail.com so that I. can reply back with a test chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
I LOVE IT!!!! Fantastic Story, i think It may be my favorite on this site. Your have a solid build up and your charicters are very real (Believable Fantasy). I love little Icarus <3 hes not worried that she'll hurt him because he trusts her. He is only concerned with pleasuring her. I actually screamed outloud from how cute that is. I love how youve made him grow from a submissive slave to this understanding and powerful partener.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
i would like to take a look.
Also glad to see u back! i missed this story.
Author's Response: Send me an email and I'll reply back with a txt file
Date: December 31 2014 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it, Icarus really gave Terra a fighting chance there and she got the 2nd piece. Really happy to see you updating again!
Date: November 11 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
So. Hows it going?
Date: November 02 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
On second thought i think my suggestion is good enough already.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Mind if I send you a few changes to my suggestion that i recently thought of?
Author's Response: No prob