Date: September 09 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
Okay maybe I can tolerate the block text. The increasing amount of flirty innuendo between Terra and Icarus is worth it!
[Report This]Date: September 09 2014 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome chapter, beside the block chapter. But you know about that.
So it was a great chapter, like the humor incorporated into the story.
Date: September 08 2014 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Great story but you shouldn't use italics for everything, either just use it for Icarus and Terra's thoughts or not at all. Makes the story painful to read, I had to copy the text into word and un italicise everything lol.
Author's Response: The only thing that is in italics is Icarus' "voice". Also I won't be able to edit this so that its easier to read. :(
[Report This]Date: September 07 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Welcome back, this is definitely a great story.
Just please space it out in paragraphs. A little hard to follow.
Date: September 07 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
*hiss* MY EYES!!
I really wanna read this, but it's a compact brick wall of text!
Author's Response: Unfortunately I'm only able to copy this from my phone and paste. This means that my phone takes away the lines that are used for spacing. Add that with the fact I'm only able to get near wifi for six minutes a day means that I can't fix this problem anytime soon. :(
Date: April 02 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
great chapter, starting to pick up on there relationship, we just need more!!
Date: March 30 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11 Awakening
Epic shorty saved the day
Author's Response: More like created an opening, but I can agree with that.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Icarus can heal? Interesting stuff there but I suppose being half elf would give him some flair for magic. Good thing too because he saved Terra from the poison which proved to be more potent than she had expected it although judging from the man's reaction to her still being alive means that her half giant side saved her from dying immediately.
Author's Response: If you didn't catch it, he manipulated an item(splitting the knife at its base), moved an object(dirt around the man's feet), and healed both the wounds and the poison.
Date: March 30 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Sweet, an update! I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support!
Date: February 05 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 Instinct
You highlight it, then press the italics button before posting
[Report This]Date: February 05 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 Instinct
Well I've been enjoying the story, and I'm interested in where the journey takes them.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 10 Instinct
What I would do it type the whole thing in a word document, italic what you want, then copy and past the whole thing to the page here.
And btw the story isn't that bad. Sure it could be improved upon but critics that say they hope the story doesn't continue are just being mean. ALSO Amazon is a category on this site. And if you compair Terra's amazon height to Icarus short stature then it is giantess content
Author's Response: I actually copy and paste from my word document(I have a folder with all my stories). I'll hopefully figure it out some day.
Date: February 05 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 10 Instinct
This was great. I hope you update the story soon. And ignore that troll that commented before. Its not like people force him to read this
[Report This]Date: February 04 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Okay, maybe you could be a bit more specific with how you are doing the story as in do you upload a file or is it copy and paste and is it on Microsoft Word, Open Office or Notepad for example.
I use Open Office, have the world italised in the document itself then copy and paste, it appears to keep the font used. Only difficulty I have now is showing a different language by showing a different font, doesn't translate on to this website.
@Critic_al , I think you are being a little harsh here.
Perhaps you could expand on those points at the very least so that the author can improve on what you said; if there is a need for improvement.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
You could try to put it in italics on whatever you use to type it out then copy and paste the entire chapter over, seems to work for me in Aftermath. Oh and nice detailed chapter, I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: Yeah, tried that with chapter nine and it didn't work. Also tried the < i > which put everything after in italic.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Man I hope you dont stop now^^ Woudl be a damn shamew if Terra and her little friend Icarus wouldnt continue their journey. Now that they are together.:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and hopefully your story of "In the Woods" comes out with another chapter soon.
Date: January 30 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 9 Connection
Nice, a long awaited update! I hope to see more!
Date: December 03 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 The accident
Oh damn, I like that Icarus now has a form of communication other then hand gestures. Good chapter, and so far, I feel this is going to be my favorite story, I really enjoy amazons instead of giantesses, and I feel your story is right up my alley, really great job. Hope to se more chapters from you soon :)
Date: December 03 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 Branding
Awww
[Report This]Date: December 03 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 8 Branding
Was that reply Terra's mind answering her own question or Icarus using telepathy? It is great to see a new chapter up, hope you update regularly!