[Report This]Date: October 13 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 For what price?
Was the composer she was trying to keep Bralms or Beetoven?
Perhaps you meant, "composure"?
[Report This]Date: October 31 2013 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 6 For what price?
I enjoy it. So far I get the impression that Terra's greatest enemy will be society itself. Of course that may change if there will be an actual antagonist. Personally I did have some trouble identifying who was speaking but that's just me. Only other critisism I have is that I found a few of the confrontations a bit underwhelming as what started off as darker cruelty ended in a lightning quick resolution. It may be intended that way you can get to the bigger part of the story but it would be nice to see some of her enemies put up a little more of a fight. If there is any scene where Terra gets any bigger then I think I'll be bought. But please do not do that unless it was already apart of the whole plot.
Author's Response: I'll respond in sentence orfer of your review. The way it is now the human society doesn't accept other races unless there is a benefit. There will be an antagonist but he/she won't be intruded yet. Easiest way to tell who's speaking is that Icarus doesn't talk. Every event in the story is connected in some way. The solution to the three men was rushed but their role was to so that even terra can be helpless. What your reading right now is just an introduction to the story, and the main plot hasn't been revealed yet. There will be growing parts later on but I can't say too much more.
Date: October 30 2013 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 6 For what price?
O3ooooooooooooooooooooooooO
Author's Response: What?
[Report This]Date: October 29 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 6 For what price?
Yeah that clears up the questions besides the cliffhanger.
Love this story and love the frequent updates.
Author's Response: I didn't mean for there to be a cliff hanger. I didn't feel like making a multi paragraph dialog for Atticus so I'm making the story itself into a chapter. The story should clear up thing s up even more. Lastly, I write as long as I can see that someone is interested.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 For what price?
And the plot just continue to thickens! I have a nagging feeling thag Icarus had his tongue cut, hence his inability to speak.
Author's Response: To put that feeling to ease, Icarus' tongue is still intact. I will say that Icarus can talk. Think of it as we have the ability to eat dirt, but we are naturally inclined not to. It will be revealed later in the story for Icarus' silence.