Date: May 12 2016 7:51 AM Title: Introduction
Awesome to see an update, each chapter detailing Caitlin's humiliation of Jack but also reducing the chances of him ever being rescued.
Author's Response:
You can definitely see the toll it's beginning to take on him; even when she's not being that rough, it's just too much for him to handle. She did say she would let him go on Sunday... but can she be trusted?
Date: May 12 2016 6:38 AM Title: Culmination
Awesome. I'm really glad you're still working on this story
Author's Response:
I'll probably be working on it forever, if not, longer! The trail might go cold for a while, but I will try to get chapters out when I have time - there's a lot more to write.
Date: May 12 2016 5:26 AM Title: Introduction
Good Chapter! I starting to doubt about any rescue for Jack.
Are you going to post another one quickly or not?
Author's Response:
I am going to try and work on one swiftly, but if I'm not happy with it, I will not put it out, unfortunately. I have to be stringent, as there were a couple of chapters I rushed out earlier, and I'm not 100% happy with them because of it.
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 8:43 PM Title: Culmination
Hooray! A new chapter, at last. And a highly...climactic one, at that.
Author's Response:
Cimactic is the word... !
Date: May 11 2016 7:36 PM Title: Culmination
Great writing, as always. Any chance we will see penny again? I've been checking back every time you release an update in the hopes of the gentle stuff with her. Either way, kudos on an excellent job
Author's Response:
Not to give too much away, but Penny is very much a key part of this story. I'm sorry it's taking so long to get there, but believe me, it will.
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 2:39 PM Title: Culmination
Another fantastic chapter! I love how sexually involved Caitlin is these last few chapters.
In the beginning, it was just physical and mental abuse, but now it's also physical and mental abuse, but this time it is about Jack's sex life in a nutshell.
Caitlin is exploiting his inexperience of sex by showing him how it's done. She does it so fast that she calls it an easy task making it more humiliating for Jack.
Jack wanted his first time with a girl his size so he could remember it as something special. However, Caitlin took that away from him and made him come by force.
Last chapter was oral sex, now it's a handjob. You would think that with these simple positions that the chapters won't be so long but Imagin8 describes these positions beautifully and uses teasing to make the final event much more meaningful.
I understood the positioning this chapter much more clearly when she is holding his legs down with her thighs and using one hand to hold his wrists. I can picture that and how she still has a free hand to tickle him.
This sexual abuse doesn't seem as bad as the physical beating that he endured in the beginning of this story. It's just my opinion, but I find this stuff highly erotic. Loving how she dominates him on her bed.
Her breasts must be bigger than his head. And he woke up facing them! Amazing! So she was awake the whole time and just held Jack there becuase she wanted to. Also, she held him there in that position so when he wakes up, his movement will notify her.
Caitlin obviously has sexual experience do to her knowledge of what to touch, what to say, and how to tease. I bet she can make Alpha's come very fast as well.
With her giant hand, I'm picturing a girl putting her hand in a baseball glove and wrapping her hand around a dick. The glove would dwarf his member and she would have a good grip on it.
I found it funny when she said "Ew". And it's not like she didn't expect that to happen. I bet she just didn't expect Jack to come that fast and when she finally noticed something sticky on her hand, she got surprised. It's like if someone spills milk on you and you freak out not knowing what it is, then someone tells you to relax and they say it's just milk.
Lots of heavy vocabulary. It's a good thing, don't get me wrong. I like learning new words here and there.
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Hey TomSpeedy, once again you've gone to great lengths to analyse the chapter, which is very cool! It is definitely meant to be erotic, this is 100% a sexual fantasy of mine, and the humiliation and injustice is definitely a key component in what makes this type of scenario very compelling to me (though I doubt I would want to experience this kind of subjugation in real life, even if there was such a giantess). It's these conflicting feelings of arousal and fear that really need to be maintained throughout the chapters with Caitlin, fuck me - she's incredibly hot, but fuck me - she's a nasty piece of work. Her character is clearly sexually experienced, a result of how attractive, popular and aggressive she is, but she's become bored of how no-one is a match for her physically, and Jack is like the opposite end of the spectrum entirely.
I'm not sure I like the baseball glove analogy, I don't think being jerked off by a big, awkward, coarse glove is especially sexy! It's a giant human hand, with feminine fingernails, that's as powerful as a hydraulic press but just as capable of sensual, delicate movements as a normal hand. The scaling up of normal body parts is something I find fascinating, and vice versa - Jack's dick would be about 2 inches long and laughably puny compared to her. If you wrap your own hand around your pinky, that's basically what we're talking about here.
The “Ewww” bit is Caitlin being a bit prissy, and also trying to belittle him further. She wanted him to come quickly, on her terms, and why miss out on an opportunity to make him feel bad about it too!
About the big words - I'm quite a wordy person, and I am chronically guilty of using a long word over a short word if it is more specific, even when most people would rather use a simpler word to make comprehension easier. That's my opinion - I'd rather be more specific, and describe more accurately what's happening, than use simple language. I've definitely learnt more words in the course of writing this, which is actually a really good exercise for me, and has made my diction generally a bit more articulate!
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 2:10 PM Title: Introduction
I really couldn't careless how long the wait is inbetween chapters for such a high quality story. There really isn't any wasted motions or words and every chapter feels like an important event or another building block to Jack's mental collapse.
Caitlin has been a really compelling enigmatic villian whose motives are so hard to pin down. The level to which she takes in tormenting and torturing him goes beyond the point of doing it for the sake of it. Which maybe I would've been inclined to think so earlier, before the moment in chapter 10 where Caitlin thinks Jack may have escaped, that there's some personal reason she chose him. Excellent story, and easily my favorite ongoing story right now.
Author's Response:
Thank you, it's very kind of you to say such nice things! This story takes such a long time to write in no small part due to the amount of revisions I do to it when I revisit over and over again. I don't have a lot of time to spend on it, and so it just takes forever to get round to finishing chapters to a level I'm happy with. This chapter was especially tricky as it had to be paced perfectly, and make sense within the context of the story - Caitlin is not 'rewarding' him with this sexual experience, she is using it against him. Even though, as the author, I find this whole scenario very erotic and, to a certain extent, wish fulfillment, for Jack it's part of a pattern of dominant, overwhelming behaviour that he can't cope with, and it has to feel like that too. He's not flat-out enjoying what should be the most exciting experience of his life, instead it's tinged with humiliation.
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 1:28 PM Title: Culmination
Wow! I wonder if she really wants to train him, to break his mind, and worship her. To be her personal pet, that nobody can find.
Author's Response:
It seems that way, doesn't it!
[Report This]Date: May 11 2016 12:57 PM Title: Introduction
I'm starting to suspect that while the toying with a beta boy isn't exactly uncommon, the extent Caitlin and her friends goes to with this is extreme in this society. Particularly the rape and kidnapping.
Im also getting a very strong vibe that Caitlin had some serious emotional trauma as a child... I don't recall if we've seen any comments on a father figure for her but I suspect something terrible happened with a man when she was younger and probably in her pre-apha state.
I long for happy endings so I'd hope something works out.. Kinda reminds me of some old story long ago when some guy's step sister inherited her Dad's fortune and that included a shrinking device. She tormented him and used him as a toy with her friends only to eventually realize her hatred for him stemmed from years of childhood abuse from the deceased father.
Author's Response:
Yeah, you're basically right. Whilst almost all Betas are most assuredly considered second-class citizens in the parallel society I depict (apart from a handful of celebrity Betas), Alphas on the whole don't really go out of their way to do anything outlandishly cruel to them as they barely affect their daily lives at all. There were high-profile incidents in the past between Alpha males and Beta females, which led to a policy of giving growth hormone to all girls where possible, but Beta men are just sort of expected to exist to do specific jobs their small size gives them an advantage at (like in the tech manufacturing industry, for eg). Caitlyn and her friends are doing things that are technically illegal (kidnap/rape/abuse/coercion), but realistically a minority of particularly unforgiving Alphas would claim that the Beta boy is 'lucky' or 'resilient' enough to cope with the law of the jungle stuff...
Date: February 03 2016 10:53 PM Title: Degradation
This story has been quite compelling, I never know where it will lead to next! I am on the edge of my seat and highly anticipating the next chapter(s).
~Johnny
Date: December 31 2015 8:25 PM Title: Degradation
"Her hand pushed against his waist and tummy, sliding him back across the silky fabric, positioning his body so that his back pressed against one hefty tit and his butt was resting against her hard stomach."
This part confused me at first becuase when I thought of the push, I thought she was pushing him away. Now, I realize that she is actually pulling him toward her by putting her hand on his midsection and bringing him toward her. Now I get it. The word "push" threw me off.
Also, it looks like a spooning position in this scene. If I'm correct, Jack's back is to Caitlin's front. If these two were letters in the alphabet, Caitlin is the capital C while Jack is the lowercase c and the big C is surrounding the little c.
It makes sense now.
Author's Response:
I can see why the word 'push' could be misinterpreted, I have amended the sentence to
"Her hand grabbed him by the waist and reeled him in, sliding his body across the silky fabric towards her, positioning his body so that his back pressed against one hefty tit, his butt resting against her hard stomach."
And yes, the Cc spooning thing is spot on!
Date: December 31 2015 8:41 AM Title: Degradation
another great chaper. i'm glad that this hasn't been abandoned.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I don't get round to this story often, but there's plenty more to come.
Date: December 31 2015 6:30 AM Title: Degradation
Nice mix of erotica with semi-torture. Really gives some heavy meaning to the term "boy toy" in this chapter. Glad to see an update. Also hoping to see some more interaction from other Alpha girls in future chapters. Caitlin is entertaining in her own way, but I like more variety when it presents itself. Good stuff overall. Keep at it!
Author's Response:
The story is already planned out, but I am intrigued by your wish to see the other Alpha girls interact with Jack - what specifically do you like about their 'variety'?
PS: He is totally a boy toy - I particularly like the words 'toy' and 'play' in this kind of scenario, I guess it implies helplessness and when used as a euphemism for sexual antics it just feels naughty, like Caitlin is 'toying' with him by giving this faux-innocent pretense for her mischievous desires.
[Report This]Date: December 31 2015 1:01 AM Title: Degradation
Oh boy, it's been months since I have seen this story. Good thing the title is unique enough that I remembered that I follow it.
First off, this must be a Christmas gift to us, becuase this chapter is the best chapter in the entire story in my opinion.
It also wraps up 2015 in a way that makes me realize how many stories I have read on this site since this story's previous chapter. Glad you are back and happy holidays.
This chapter should've been called gratification or graduation becuase welcome to the club Jack, you just had your first sexual experience.
But let's just take a few steps back. We start with Caitlin and this ice that she places on Jack's shoulder. She knows that her pool party was a bit too much and I think she believes that she went too far this time and is pondering some thoughts as she tends to Jack.
I love the description you gave for Caitlin as she came from the pool. Her sillouette is all he can see as light flows around her. Jack must think she is like an angel at that point, the kind where light glows around them. Because Caitlin is now being gentle with Jaxk as she takes him to her kitchen counter.
Caitlin reminds me of a former coach I met. He was always being tough on his players. When Caitlin said "don't be a fucking wuss" or "don't get comfy", I got reminded of him. It's like she is training Jack for some thing.
Speaking of training, her brutal torture on Jack seemed to be a way of making Jack obedient to her. She wanted to enforce this idea constantly and did it in such a fashion that Jack is scared beyond measure and Caitlin wants Jack to feel helpless. As Jack suffers, Caitlin gains pleasure. She wants Jack to suffer mentally not physically, and that's the key difference between her torture and what happened at the pool party.
Caitlin then continues to surprise Jack by not just being a cruel girl that we have seen in the last 10 chapters. Last chapter, we saw some concern, now we learn some thing else. Caitlin wants Jack sexually. And not like romantic sex, this was brutal and forced like a type of female domination.
It all started when she transformed cruel to sexy with the ice cube. She uses ice on his groin, and that stuff hurts deeply I bet. Then she immediately heats things up (literally) by wrapping her hands around his dick and purring like a cat with her prey. (Imagine a giant girl wrapping your penis. Yeah, I know right.)
Now Jack starts freaking out in a way that I began laughing. Like, now his captor wants to play with him sexually and his mind is spinning like "what the hell is gonna happen?"
Then part 2 of this chapter begins and Caitlin gets naughty, like she is on the naughty list right now even though she got Jack in bed for Christmas becuase that is exactly what happened. She scares Jack by whispering seductively and I'm thinking "Jack is so lucky this chapter".
One thing that was kinda confusing was the positioning of these two during the bed scene, like I couldn't tell who was on top or bottom of what. At the end it was clear but when the scene stars, I had difficulty picturing it all enfold.
Caitlin could've tied Jack up with some tape or rope, but Caitlin manhandling Jack was even better. It just showed how much power and control she has. I mean, her hand alone keeps Jack from getting up. Wow. In addition, her legs wrapped him up like a doll. It felt like she was kinda squeezing him with her legs as you described her weight holding him down.
Lastly, thank you for including some good old facesitting in her. It is one of my favorite positions and you described it beautifully. Caitlin used his face for her own pleasure for the rest of the chapter and I wished it could have gone on longer, I mean that was fantastic.
Best chapter in this story so far in my opinion, and I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Quite a lot to respond to here!
First of all, very pleased you liked this chapter as it's an important one that took a lot of effort to write. It's the moment the whole story has been steadily building towards so at least there's a bit of closure there - the inevitable has happened.
It's called 'Degradation' because that's exactly what happens to Jack; there is no triumph or gratification in being abused in this manner. Whilst it is a sexual experience for Caitlin, it is a thoroughly traumatic one for him, there's nothing for him to celebrate.
You have done a lot of analysis into the characters' motivations and subtext, and for the most part you're along the right lines, though there is no 'one way' to interpret things. Jack probably wouldn't think of Caitlin as an angel for even a second, however, and she would not care whether his anguish was mental or physical so long as she got what she wanted. The face-sitting in particular is written to be primarily erotic, so yes, he is lucky in some way, but if you were put in that situation in real life, it would probably be deeply distressing, and I'm trying to reflect that too.
I'm sorry you found the positioning confusing, I've tried to be quite descriptive without the detail overwhelming the actions. I've read it back and I think it's fairly clear what's going on at all times, maybe a re-read might flow better? I also agree that him being unbound and naked gives a different dimension to the interaction from earlier chapters, which is quite deliberate I assure you - I don't want to repeat the same scenarios over and over!
Finally, thank you for taking the time to give such comprehensive feedback, it's nice to see how other people interpret your work and I've really enjoyed going through your thought processes.
~ Imagin8
[Report This]Date: December 30 2015 8:36 PM Title: Degradation
Tom Speedy will no doubt have a lengthier analysis. But, I can boil Caitlin's problem down to one sentence.
If sanity were beer, this girl would definitely be five cans short of a six pack.
Author's Response:
Unhinged? Probably.
Dangerous? Very.
Motives? Uncertain.
There is a news story from Russia in 2009 (which may or may not have been a sensationalist hoax) that claimed a 28-year-old female black-belt overpowered and repeatedly raped a 32-year-old male would-be robber for 3 days as punishment. Reactions to the story from a large proportion of commenters (presumably male) treated the whole thing like a dream scenario, stating how lucky the guy was or how much they would've liked to have robbed her store instead.
A weak man being overpowered and raped by a strong, attractive female is not viewed the same way as a weak female being raped by a strong, attractive male, even though obviously it should be - it's a sexual crime. Jack is a Beta, a kind of second-class, perhaps even sub-human citizen, most Alphas (especially men) would view this story very much as him getting 'lucky', even going so far as to be jealous of him for getting to 'sleep' with Caitlin. The girl is clearly a monster for her actions, but from her perspective, and the perspective of most of her Alpha friends, what she is doing doesn't appear 'serious' in the way that Jack, you and I view it. I'm not defending her actions, or trying to make any larger point about rape in general as this is erotic fiction with a sub / dom giantess kink, but I just wanted to explain how I view what's going on in the story.
Date: December 30 2015 7:00 PM Title: Degradation
Loving this story. I'm actually hoping for some form of justice for Jack, but as Caitlyn said, the world isn't always fair...But what a bitch though, using that as an excuse for using and abusing him like he was nothing.
Author's Response:
Karma is a long way off - if it even exists for Jack at all.
Date: December 30 2015 6:37 PM Title: Degradation
The emotional tension in this is so freaking hot. The wait is certainly worth it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it - sorry to keep people waiting so long.
Date: October 19 2015 12:57 PM Title: Inundation
The only negative thing about this excellent tale is the time between chapters. Sigh.
Author's Response:
I know, right?
Date: September 19 2015 12:08 PM Title: Inundation
This story has all my favourite elements! Good writing, suspense, giant dildos, and powerful women dominating vulnerable men!
At the same time, I feel like I will inevitably be torn by the ending.
One side of me wants a happy ending, where the bullies are punished, and Jack runs off into the sunset with Penny.
...And the masochist in me wants Jack to be completely brainwashed by Caitlin, and made into her cute little pet/toy!
Either way, this is an excellent story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2015 8:06 PM Title: Introduction
Makes sense now. Thanks.