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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2019 7:52 PM Title: Collection

I love the emotions in the scenes, you bring out Jack's despair and I think, depression. Same for Penny. I really feel for them, especially Penny. I fear the next chapter I read it'll be that she has some terminal disease. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2019 5:47 PM Title: Collection

Well, if he and his folks go to visit his grandfather, again, he'll have a perfectly legit excuse for being there. So, what could be the harm?

Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 03 2019 1:17 AM Title: Collection

As always, it's a pleasure to see the story alive !

I really like how the Alphas are depucted here. The adults don't seem as rude as the teens, but they clearly lacks even more knowledge about how to interact with them. I guess that the older they get, the harder it is to remember the times they didn't tower above them ?

Concerning Penny... that girl's an angel. She is in pain, hospitalized and she feels bad about not being with Jack at school ! That some serious caring here. I also have the feeling she's have a major growth spurt soon, because of the way you described her illness, but of course it could be something else entirely.

I can't wait to know more, but I'll still do so as long as necessary ;)

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