[Report This]Date: May 19 2016 10:01 AM Title: Anticipation
AT LAST! The cavalry has arrived.
If I could give you eleven points, I most definitely would. Bravo!
Author's Response:
50 points to Gryffindor!!!
Date: May 19 2016 12:33 AM Title: Anticipation
OH MY GOD SHE'S BACK! Also, you're frequent updates are a godsend. I like the detail of the house, the half-steps meant for Betas, shows her family actually cares about Betas or perhaps there is a Beta member. Either way, it shows the difference.
Author's Response:
My frequent updates will now dry up for quite a while I'm afraid, but it was good while it lasted! The story has moved on and developed quite a bit over the last 5 chapters, and there will be more to come in future, when I have time.
The stairs detail is something I've been saving up; I think this is actually the first staircase mentioned in the story so far, as Jack lives in an Beta-sized bungalow, and Caitlin in an Alpha-sized one.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2016 7:40 PM Title: Anticipation
He was expecting to go to hell, but instead he found heaven.
Author's Response:
Very nicely put!