Date: May 29 2015 9:03 AM Title: Preparation
Can't Jack just break the window? Since he's been kidnapped he shouldn't have to pay for any damages. He's the victim here.
Author's Response:
Jack knows that the glass is impossible for someone of his size to break - it's designed to be strong enough to withstand an impact by a fully-grown Alpha, so that's 8-times as strong as he is. Even if he threw something heavy at it, he could never get enough force behind his throw.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 10:19 PM Title: Preparation
Oh snap things are turning up. Awesome chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 7:51 PM Title: Preparation
Wow, what a deep chapter.
It kinda reminded me of those 'escape' games where you have to find stuff and unlock things.
I have a feeling that Caitlin will discover the message that Jack sent. Maybe by fingerprints, smell of a beta, tablet position. I got that feeling.
I like the detail you put into Jack making a skeleton key and the part when he was trying to decode the tablet.
Caitlin is coming soon. I wonder what she will discover in the next chapter!
Date: May 28 2015 1:29 PM Title: Preparation
Buzz-killer!
;-D
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 12:14 PM Title: Preparation
If she doesn't go near the hamper, why NOT hide there? In fact, why doesn't he put her dirty clothes underneath the T-shirt, then re-lock the wardrobe, before getting in the hamper?
Author's Response:
Some reasons why Jack won't risk hiding in there:
i) Perhaps the basket is empty because she threw all the clothes out to look for him when he first escaped to the bathroom. He doesn't know for certain that it is unused.
ii) Even if it's unused, the laundry basket is a very obvious place to hide, it's one of the first places she will check, and it was left empty without a lid on it, so if he covers himself in clothes it's even more obvious something has changed.
Also: if he puts dirty clothes under the t-shirt (presumably to create a Jack-sized bundle), at best it will delay her by about 2 seconds.
Date: May 28 2015 7:57 AM Title: Preparation
Hey take your time man.
I liked this chapter, it revealed a lot about the world Jack lives in, from faking antique stuff for Alphas to monstrous dildos, you've put quite a bit of thought into this and it shows!
Good work there!