Date: June 01 2015 9:53 AM Title: Introduction
Wow... just wow. Best chapter yet, Caitlin's rage and then breakdown was amazing. Desperate to find out what happens next!
Date: May 31 2015 8:17 PM Title: Introduction
Saw a bit more of Caitlin here, what with the drinking and anger over Jack disapearing. I really like what you've done so far. Now its whether Jack can survive the night with an angry Amazon holding him close.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 10:16 PM Title: Introduction
I just read the whole story through and I fucking love this. You have an unbelievable talent when it comes to writing out domination scenes with Catilin, they're so descriptive and sexy. I personally loved it when she uses her feet, as well as when she pushes Jack's head against her breasts.
Caitlin is by far my favorite character, she's like my dream girl come true. A giantess that can still fit in the bedroom, and do personal activities with you. She's incredibly tall, has red hair (I like red heads, their hair just looks so exotic and wild), she's muscular (always a turn one when you've got a giantess fetish), and she knows how to be domineering.
My only regret, however, is that she doesn't seem to have any redeemable qualities about herself. I understand why that is, sometimes you just need a bad guy to be bad. I just wish there was something more personal about her character that could redeem her in some way,and make her easier to sympathise with. I mean, hell, I'd worship her in real life the way she'd want me to. But only if I knew that she was doing it for our mutual enjoyment, and that she still saw me as an equal and not a lesser being. I understand that that won't happen, as Caitlin is set to be the primary antagonist and nothing else. I just wish I could like her for reasons other than her looks.
But hey, don't listen to me about that, I'm not trying to write your story. You write it the way you want it written man, cause it's coming out amazingly the way you've got it set up.
Author's Response:
I understand what you mean about wanting to find the redeemable qualities in a character who appears to be incredibly cruel and/or evil, it's a response I myself have to most protagonists like this, however in many ways it's a lot cleaner to simply make them irretrievably bad. As you've stated, if she was nicer, she would be incredibly desirable in a lot of ways - that's sort of the whole crux of the issue.
Not to give the game away too much, but some facts that will come to light that explain why Caitlin's is the way she is, though not for some time.
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 8:26 PM Title: Introduction
I always enjoy comparisons in stories, especially when it is within a specific size range. Its just odd for me when a comparison comes in that is close but not quite there. Its just a trait of mine to pay attention to the smallest of details in stories I like. What you did with the protein bar was spot on as everything that is twice as big will have 8 times the volume. What caught me off guard was the dildo. For a beta girl it would be 1 foot long and 2.5 inch wide. That tells me that either 1) alpha males are hung like crazy or 2) the girl has an oversized dildo.
Its a wonderful story and I can't wait to read more of it.
Author's Response:
Your suspicions are correct regarding the dildo; Caitlin is just under 6' 7" in old money, so she's a big girl whichever way you look at it. I doubled up the size of a truly enormous real life dildo, so it's not unprecedented, but it is extreme for effect. Jack is also completely naive about this sort of thing so all it does is scare him, Jack doesn't know how hung Alpha guys are but this 'evidence' adds to his feeling of inadequacy.
Date: May 25 2015 11:19 AM Title: Introduction
Fucking yes!!!!! This is my favourite story ever on this site, so happy you've updated it. CONTINUE IT PLEASE!
Date: May 25 2015 10:39 AM Title: Introduction
I log on to my account after years just to reply for this update.
This why I've been checking this site everyday. Finally an update! Hope this continues.
A little suggestion, whenever there is a NWO story, what I wanna see is how the hero interact with the world instead of just a few people around. That feels like something fall into the regular genre. Like it would be nice to see how hes parents interact with the alpha world, or in the school say his friends. I think that's an aspect I really want to see. That been said I still enjoy this story massively. and truly appreciate that you decide to pick it up again.
Author's Response:
Hey swkswk123, I'm very flattered you logged in just to comment on the latest chapter!
I understand your point about how including more stories from other aspects of the NWO, like looking at his parents or friends, would help flesh out the world, but the very basic answer is that if it doesn't help Jack's story move along, then I'm not going to write about it. The whole narrative thus far has revolved around a single main character and his trials and tribulations, I've tried to add as much context as necessary without going into overbearing detail, and there is a lot of thought that has not been put onto the page that may become clearer in future chapters. Ultimately, this is a complex world and I've attempted to be as logical, realistic and true as I possibly can be in what I've covered - I can't think of everything, but it has spent a long time bouncing around my brain and I've been able to answer some of my own questions about things you raise.
In terms of Jack's experience in this NWO, he is young and introspective - he feels like the Alpha world is a scary place and spends a lot more time obsessing about the pre-Growth Hormone era than facing up to the reality of his own era. Jack's parents, for the record, are uneasy with the way humanity is going but comfortable, they both have safe jobs in areas still suited to Betas (Dad works in electronics, Mum works with children). The two other Beta kids, Delon and Shen, get by for various reasons: Delon is tall for a Beta and isn't as intimidated or uneasy around Alphas, Shen is highly intelligent and therefore of use to the Alpha majority, so he isn't picked on. Jack doesn't appear to have, or feel like he has, any kind of desirable qualities either for a future career, relationship, etc - so he retreats into his own mind.
Hope that's a bit of info to help flesh out the context, it's not explicitly mentioned but the characters follow these kind of rules to make the world believable without explaining every permutation of the NWO.
[Report This]Date: May 25 2015 9:09 AM Title: Introduction
Christmas has come early. Glad to see this story will continue, looking forward to see how far Caitlin is willing to go to solidfy her control over Jack.
Date: May 25 2015 8:21 AM Title: Introduction
Glad to know this story continues.However, odds are not vwith Jack about escaping !!!
Date: May 25 2015 3:20 AM Title: Introduction
Oh boy Jack is in his own personal hell! Caitlin is like some Amazonian goddess , don't even know if he can escape on his own or he'll need some outside help.
Great to see you back, its been almost 2 years since this story got updated but it doesn't matter!
Date: October 25 2014 3:09 PM Title: Introduction
WORK! we beg of you!!
Date: September 23 2014 2:55 PM Title: Introduction
Really loved this story meets all my requirements for the perfect story write chapter 7 soon please
[Report This]Date: December 20 2013 10:32 AM Title: Introduction
Glad to see another chapter!
Maybe when this present arc ends, you might give us a little insight into what his parents do and how they're treated. Since they made a decision to keep him as a Beta, thus ruining any real chance of happiness and prosperity. Unless as I said in an earlier comment, he goes to the 3rd world. I'm still hopeful that something can happen between him and Penny.
Hopefully we'll see another chapter soon?
Date: November 22 2013 7:21 AM Title: Introduction
It has been a while since you last updated, I hope you haven't hit writer's block.
Author's Response:
I'm afraid I've just been busy - the chapters are planned out I just haven't the time to spend writing them up to the standard I like. When I do get round to it hopefully I'll be able to do a few in quick succession.
Date: October 27 2013 1:43 AM Title: Introduction
You have hit my fantasy right on. From the size disparity, to the muscle size, the personality, the "torture" and everything. Particularly the little episode with Caitlin stuffing Jack into her gym-bag is something I've always thought about and now you did it perfectly.
Please, please, please continue this story. I absolutely love it.
Date: September 27 2013 12:12 AM Title: Introduction
Question: Do Beta guys sit in front of the class? I mean, if they ever sat in the back, they could hardly see the blackboard or anything else, their vision being blocked by the bodies of the big alphas in front of them, right? Or are they pushed to the back of the class, where they cannot see over the bodies of the towering alphas, because no one cares about them anyway? :)
Author's Response:
There are so few Beta kids per class (three at most, but usually none) that their desks are to the side of the room where they can easily be tucked away between classes by the Alpha teachers. There is no set pattern or protocol for them any longer (now that they are such a minority), and their sightlines are not guaranteed, though some teachers make more of an effort than others. In case you were wondering, there are no Beta teachers because they're unable to maintain discipline over students so much bigger - a lot of the Alpha teachers would rather the Betas went to specialist schools as split-scale tutoring is complicated, so they do tend to resent and look down on them as much as the Alpha kids themselves, setting a precedent.
Date: September 25 2013 6:05 AM Title: Introduction
Your poser images or poser video are not bad quality-wise and I don't think most of your readers/fans are very picky regarding this as your poserwork is brillant.Anyways I respect your decision.
Date: September 24 2013 10:27 PM Title: Introduction
way more stores need giantess at this size.
Date: September 24 2013 1:04 PM Title: Introduction
Great Story!Besides, I'd like to know if you will illustrate as I know you're a great poser maker.
Author's Response:
I've been using my 3D modelling skillz to help flesh out the story - to get comparative sizes and things as accurate as possible - but I won't be able to make the renders looks as good as I can imagine it when writing, so I probably won't try to. I may release a couple of test images to show the basic 'look' of the characters, but I'd rather that people let their own preferences shape how they envisage it.
Date: September 24 2013 7:53 AM Title: Introduction
Sounds like Jack is in trouble! I hope she doesnt hurt him too much or maybe Penny saves him , the latter is unlikely though.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2013 6:41 AM Title: Introduction
I think Penny is going to be his only hope really for any relations with a woman. Based on the way the author set the story up, its government mandated that all girls receive the hormone. Even with some probably slipping through the cracks, he and any other Beta guy will be hard pressed to find a Beta girl close to home. They will have to settle for a life of lonliness, garnering the attention of a sympathetic Alpha girl, or leave the country to find a woman in an underdeveloped country.
This is a good story so far. As you can assume from the last paragraph, I'd like to see things work out for Jack somehow. Can't wait for the next chapter.