Date: September 23 2013 6:24 AM Title: Introduction
Well 6' 3.5" is actually tall for a woman, to the extent that it could be said to be freakish and as such I wonder if Penny got a proportionate boost because of the drug, more than expected anyway. As for your story keep it up as I am hooked on it and wish to see it end. And to be a little shameless about this but please read mine as well. The one called The Escape as I intend to finish it.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2013 1:52 PM Title: Introduction
I'm reall enjoying this story so far and i can only encourage you to continue.
I hope this story isn't forgotten
Author's Response:
I won't be forgetting about the story, but updates might be quite far apart. Ta, Imagin8
Date: September 13 2013 1:05 PM Title: Introduction
It's a nice introduction and the explanation as to why the girls are bigger is actually quite believable, unlike in the a lot of stories. There's probably more I should be saying but I'm eager to get to the next chapter as I am enjoying the story so far. The description is generally good although I suppose a little more about the school would be nice. That's not too important though as the main focus is the girls and I see you have enough description about them. I especially like the emphasis on the legs as he wouldn't necessarily see their faces from his perspective.
Date: September 13 2013 9:29 AM Title: Introduction
I am guessing Penny was a late bloomer, became an Alpha at fifteen which is why she wont talk about her life beyond a year ago.
[Report This]Date: September 13 2013 7:43 AM Title: Introduction
Uh-oh! Looks like this trio has a new shopping mascot, after all.
Date: September 12 2013 9:23 PM Title: Introduction
This story is pretty great so far. I've read other stories like this but unfortunatly they never seem to get finished. PLEASE DON"T FOLLOW THAT TREND! I have high hopes....Also would you be interested if other authors wrote stories in your universe? Maybe.
Author's Response:
I'm currently writing Chapter 6 and I've planned out for at least another 3-4 beyond that, so assuming I don't change it around drastically or drop it there will be more to come - it might take a while, as I'm quite a slow, anally-retentive person and I don't have a great deal of spare time! I can't promise there will be a 'finale' either, but I have plenty of ideas to keep it moving and potentially tie it up at the end.
In terms of other authors writing about this universe, I'd prefer that if they did they set is somewhere completely different and didn't involve any of the locations or characters I'm using - just so I have freedom to go in any direction and not worry about other people adding their restrictions to it. Another issue would be if anyone tried to expand on things like GH-X2, the way society functioned towards Betas, etc - which I'm planning to go into further detail on later - so if you'd like to write about a world with normal and double-size humans then go for it but please do your own take on it! Furthermore, it's not a completely new or unique premise; as I've mentioned in the story notes, I've merely taken a brilliant concept from a story called 'Classic Guys' and tweaked it to fit what I wanted - all credit to SpawnGTS for the highly realistic and compelling original.
Thanks for the kind words, Imagin8