Reviews For Taylor's New Toy
Reviewer: elza3imza3im Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 6:28 PM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
Date: December 08 2013 6:28 PM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
very good
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 11:15 AM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
Date: September 09 2013 11:15 AM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
OK! I'm officially jealous. This whole brilliant opener was longer than my entire prequel to IOTBTFOS!
Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 5:16 PM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
Date: September 01 2013 5:16 PM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
Nope, this was my 'Actual' First-Story, Really! The Shack ' was second, I deleted my first attempt at this one after the first reveiw, only had it up for about 2 hours. I had large blocks of text that weren't spaced out enough..... THAT was my first, major change that I had to make...Ha, oh- well, I can see why you liked 'The Shack' so much, but, I would have guessed that you'd have liked 'Wombat Island' even more? ;`)
Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 3:36 PM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
Date: September 01 2013 3:36 PM Title: Ch. 1 Introduction
Oh wait, I forgot about this one. Got it confused with your 'actual' first story.
Still like it though!