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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 26 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

You still tend not to separate the dialogue from the narrative text. But, at least you're double-spacing the paragraphs.

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