Date: August 11 2013 11:33 AM Title: The Unfortunate Story of Tiny Amy
You should do a follow up of Amy's life with Dennis before this hapened. Explain different things Dennis did to her. That'd be great
Date: August 11 2013 11:31 AM Title: The Unfortunate Story of Tiny Amy
You should do a follow up of Amy's life with Dennis before this hapened. Explain different things Dennis did to her. That'd be great
[Report This]Date: August 10 2013 1:07 AM Title: The Unfortunate Story of Tiny Amy
Wow man.
Truly effed up... the ending was so shocking. It gave me the shivers... and the power of suggestion what happened during her last hours... damn. Almost threw up.
Great short story, great writing. I like it. (I like anything from gentle PG to something twisted like this. That's a compliment.)
Author's Response:
Hey man I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah its pretty dark and shocking. To be honest this is a little too violent. I don't normally write stuff like this. But you start writing the story and you just go with it. The main goal here for me was to create a piece that allowed the reader to really put the pieces of the puzzle together themselves rather than spell it all out for them. Let them imagine what happen after Mary leave Amy. Really goes to show yu that it's not all fun and games for a tiny person in this world.
Next time I'll write something a little less depressing though haha