Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2013 5:39 AM Title: The More Things Change

WOW, it's really heating up for Cole-('purple-haze glittering') the changing size at will,'Thing' was a little unrealistic,(so to speak) but your working it in naturally...

Maybe I would have made it more complicated, and he would have to really work at it to change size, like maybe go through a lot of physical pain and mental exhustion to complete the transformation, (shrinking or returning to normal) which would make it more 'believeable' in a sense.  Cole is just 'Too' casual about it, ya know?

Somehow, that kind-of takes away from it....

Still, great story and really a fun read!

 

Author's Response:

I never even considered making the process one that takes a physical toll on the user. Thanks for that suggestion.