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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 6:38 PM Title: Wall to Wall

This is really good dude!  You've even thrown in a bit of humor, along with the fear effect, it flows nicely and feels very natural...

Cole is in for some tremendous FUN!  I can see  'that', coming from Bree already,  she's a real self-centered Be-outch!

I hope she doesn't get too carried away, and splatters him all over her floor!



Author's Response:

I've often found that a bit of humor goes a long way. The fear effect works only slightly for me personally. Cole and Bree are based on myself and my girlfriend and I assure you she can definitely be a...well you know what I mean.

 

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