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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

Great update. And nice revelation at the end. Hope Ava and Parker reunite somehow. Also would've loved to have Parker give Patricia a foot rub. But at any rate great story and I'm looking forward to future installments.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks aaron!  I would have as well, but I have to save some tricks for later...Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow! You tie some of the plot threads together. And, yet, you still manage to mystify me as to the ultimate aim of this story (other than the obvious relation-shipping of Ava and Parker).

Author's Response:

That's good!  Haha, means I'm doing my job correctly...

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