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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

P.S.---looks like the "fatal error" has been corrected.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

So, Big Mamazon isn't going to keep him for herself, huh? I wonder who will become aware of him, first, then: Victoria or Patricia?

Author's Response:

Yeah, it finally started working for me today.  Concerning who will become aware of him first, I might have a curveball ready on that one.

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