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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

The looking out the soda can scene at her mouth is very well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I try to make pov shots like that as experiential as I can without making them samey. I hope I do a good job, but it's hard to tell. I appreciate your feedback on the matter.

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