Date: June 25 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Dear god... this is AMAZING!! Please, please, please continue this!!! It's rare to find stories with such depth here lately, and this is absolutely one of them!! Please, continue this, it's extraordinary!!
If I may ask a couple of small things: could you please add character descriptions? As in, what do they look like, their hair or eye color, skin tone, stuff like that? Also, lastly (I'm sure it will be specified later) but are they 1 inch, half an inch, or exactly what? I hope half an inch, honestly, if not slightly less. But still, please let me know what the characters look like, or add those in the chapters or in the next one. Also, personally, I hope there will be a lot of bare footplay interation, but that's just me, heh...
Other than that, I think everyone would agree with me in saying that, so far, this is absolutely fantastic! Please keep up the good work!!