Reviews For Sisterly Love
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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love the story. I just hope you make the sister more cruel. I love these kind of forced scenarios. However, if you make it that the brother, Jim, is not into it it will even be better. These are the two things I enjoy in these types of storie. Also, not many stories use these combinations.

Reviewer: rygar300 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Try discribing her body. Like is she tall/short, big/small chested, thin/fat. That kind of thing. Also, I really like what you have so far. Cant wait to see more.

Reviewer: GMD Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Suggestions? Longer chapters. That's about it. But for a first story... Not bad at all. Just longer chapters. And more dialogue wouldn't hurt. But it's good. Really.

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