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Reviewer: PoweredByCaffeine Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 3, Day 1 - Hour 2

I love the personality you gave Yuki... it fits her very well. I also like how you included yourself in the story; it's a nice touch and it's something I can relate to. I'll be checking back to see how this story develops. You've done a great job so far :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope you like the next chapter. More of Yuki's and my sexual side comes out but it's also full of crushing. 

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

sweet. This is a great first chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the first review, I was debating on the chapter format, with this post, eventually the current day will catch up in the story line as it's been hinted in the story line.

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